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Comment from Carol Clark2
This is an emotional story, starting with anger and ending with an understanding that love was present all along. It somehow seems right for her to buy the house. It's too bad they never reconciled. Blessings. Carol
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This is an emotional story, starting with anger and ending with an understanding that love was present all along. It somehow seems right for her to buy the house. It's too bad they never reconciled. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 18-Apr-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
If we take a look at everyone's lives it's easy to see there is something missing. It's just life. No, matter how bad it gets, never say it can't get worse. And when it's at its best, enjoy every second, because it's all about to blow all to hell. Thanks for sharing.
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If we take a look at everyone's lives it's easy to see there is something missing. It's just life. No, matter how bad it gets, never say it can't get worse. And when it's at its best, enjoy every second, because it's all about to blow all to hell. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, what an unexpected ending. I enjoyed every line, and you made me cry. We sometimes are losing precious moments with our loved ones that cannot be brought back.
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Wow, what an unexpected ending. I enjoyed every line, and you made me cry. We sometimes are losing precious moments with our loved ones that cannot be brought back.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. Your son structure your paragraphing and you're going to make it for a very good read. Do you have a blessed day and may you have a terrific week.
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This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. Your son structure your paragraphing and you're going to make it for a very good read. Do you have a blessed day and may you have a terrific week.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent story in the book Emotional Guest List. Some people get stuck in anger and never move toward hope. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is an excellent story in the book Emotional Guest List. Some people get stuck in anger and never move toward hope. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Divorces can be complicated and difficult for kids to understand and comprehend. Children are often manipulated to favour one person in the relationship and it isn't until the children grow up that they understand the dynamics. It took a long time for me to understand my parents. A poignant write Carol, forgiveness is always the key to mending relationships, love Dolly x x x
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Divorces can be complicated and difficult for kids to understand and comprehend. Children are often manipulated to favour one person in the relationship and it isn't until the children grow up that they understand the dynamics. It took a long time for me to understand my parents. A poignant write Carol, forgiveness is always the key to mending relationships, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a real tearjerker. Neither father nor daughter tried to break the distance from each other, but it turns out they loved each other from afar. It is sad they missed so much time to know each other until he was dead.
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This is a real tearjerker. Neither father nor daughter tried to break the distance from each other, but it turns out they loved each other from afar. It is sad they missed so much time to know each other until he was dead.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2025
Comment from tfawcus
The conflicted feelings in this chapter add tension to your story. I like the way you have personified the emotions. A nice twist. Each one has a part to play in the final resolution.
One very minor comment. Beware of repeating the same information twice in different ways. Although she first thinks it and then articulates it, I don't think you need both "Something in her gut told her it would have something to do with her dad," and "Well, I'm guessing the favor has something to do with Dad."
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The conflicted feelings in this chapter add tension to your story. I like the way you have personified the emotions. A nice twist. Each one has a part to play in the final resolution.
One very minor comment. Beware of repeating the same information twice in different ways. Although she first thinks it and then articulates it, I don't think you need both "Something in her gut told her it would have something to do with her dad," and "Well, I'm guessing the favor has something to do with Dad."
Comment Written 13-Apr-2025
Comment from royowen
It's funny, just when you think the people that should have love, actually had, it makes so much difference, the parent that had never come to a football game, Ora cricket, a concert, regretting all that, really did care, and loved you all along, the emotion may not leaves immediately, but the healing had begun, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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It's funny, just when you think the people that should have love, actually had, it makes so much difference, the parent that had never come to a football game, Ora cricket, a concert, regretting all that, really did care, and loved you all along, the emotion may not leaves immediately, but the healing had begun, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story touched my heart. I have tears. Thank you for sharing it with us. I think we've all been there at one point in our lives.
blasted her.She unlocked the door, swung it open (space needed after the period)
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This story touched my heart. I have tears. Thank you for sharing it with us. I think we've all been there at one point in our lives.
blasted her.She unlocked the door, swung it open (space needed after the period)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2025
