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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Fade to Red, Blue then White"Short Stories Dealing with Emotions
16 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love this one Carol especially the way you've used the emotions. Like - Resilience leaned in close - Embarrassment wandered off the stage and Resilience stayed.Very entertaining storytelling, cheers
valda
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Love this one Carol especially the way you've used the emotions. Like - Resilience leaned in close - Embarrassment wandered off the stage and Resilience stayed.Very entertaining storytelling, cheers
valda
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This was a cute little story. It would appear the bride maid is going to get connected with the grooms brother. How sweet that is.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
This was a cute little story. It would appear the bride maid is going to get connected with the grooms brother. How sweet that is.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. There's nothing quite as devastating for a young girl then to find that she's the last one in their group to have walked out to get married. This is an interesting story and has a very nice moral. Patricia
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This is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. There's nothing quite as devastating for a young girl then to find that she's the last one in their group to have walked out to get married. This is an interesting story and has a very nice moral. Patricia
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The event was funny, a list of unplanned events, /The frog underwear added a layer of funny. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. The event was funny, a list of unplanned events, /The frog underwear added a layer of funny. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
We all have a tendency to be embarrassed about all the wrong things that we shouldn't. A slip or a fall, could, and often does happen to all of us. So, why be embarrassed? But having improper thoughts about someone doesn't bother us a bit. We just keep those wayward convictions hidden and don't feel a smidgeon of guilt.
Thanks for sharing.
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We all have a tendency to be embarrassed about all the wrong things that we shouldn't. A slip or a fall, could, and often does happen to all of us. So, why be embarrassed? But having improper thoughts about someone doesn't bother us a bit. We just keep those wayward convictions hidden and don't feel a smidgeon of guilt.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Good one! And later on that will be a marvellous story to tell the children and grandchildren! I am glad resilience and laughter stayed, and embarrassment wandered away. Sometimes laughter is the best response! Excellent story.
Wendy
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Good one! And later on that will be a marvellous story to tell the children and grandchildren! I am glad resilience and laughter stayed, and embarrassment wandered away. Sometimes laughter is the best response! Excellent story.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
Comment from w.j.debi
What a great 'if anything could go wrong at the wrong moment' that turns into ' but it turned out so right' story.
You bring the characters to life. Embarrassment turns to laughter for what else are you going to do?
They will certainly have something to laugh over as they tell this story over and over in the future.
Thanks for sharing your creative story and a wonderful sense of humor.
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What a great 'if anything could go wrong at the wrong moment' that turns into ' but it turned out so right' story.
You bring the characters to life. Embarrassment turns to laughter for what else are you going to do?
They will certainly have something to laugh over as they tell this story over and over in the future.
Thanks for sharing your creative story and a wonderful sense of humor.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You can come up with the most remarkable stories. Do you ever sleep at night, or do you dream stories? In this one I understand the appearance and disappearance of all kinds of emotions. If there is a bride's magazine still buying fiction, send it off to them. This is hysterically funny even without the picture.
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You can come up with the most remarkable stories. Do you ever sleep at night, or do you dream stories? In this one I understand the appearance and disappearance of all kinds of emotions. If there is a bride's magazine still buying fiction, send it off to them. This is hysterically funny even without the picture.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like a divine encounter, (I usually mean, with God, or something He engineered) but who's to say He doesn't. Some of the best friends are made through the clumsiness of others aren't they? As always Carol a creative written, blessings Roy
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There's nothing like a divine encounter, (I usually mean, with God, or something He engineered) but who's to say He doesn't. Some of the best friends are made through the clumsiness of others aren't they? As always Carol a creative written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
Comment from Harry Craft
Oh Carol, this is such a great story! I really enjoyed reading it too. I was not sure where it was going at first, but part of it was predictable. Keep up the excellent work!
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Oh Carol, this is such a great story! I really enjoyed reading it too. I was not sure where it was going at first, but part of it was predictable. Keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
