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Not by bread alone

100 word fiction

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Comment from Thesis
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This was a very thoughtful and inspiring post. It highlights real issues and the ways that people can handle them. During this period of economic hardship, the Vicar put the homeless man's needs before his own and showed the kindness that many others would not.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
    Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 100 word story you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
    Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our deeds define us and showing charity is a rare occurrence these days, I enjoyed this faithful post as the vicar opened up his heart and the vicarage to the homeless, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
    Yes and thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed reading your story. The way you describe Vicar Edward's struggle creates an emotional connection. That shift when he decides to invite the homeless man in is wonderful. You've captured this moment so well - and with so few words. It's a wonderful story - shared so well. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
    Great review zanya