The Summit
He finally made it to...5 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
You're kicking ass in these contests, Sharon. I'm sorry I don't have a six for this one. A virtual six and compliments.
Congratulations on your winning entry and splendid poem.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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You're kicking ass in these contests, Sharon. I'm sorry I don't have a six for this one. A virtual six and compliments.
Congratulations on your winning entry and splendid poem.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much, l always appreciate your reviews. :)
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Most welcome. My pleasure as always.
Sal :)) xoxo
Comment from lancellot
This is very nicely written, and it has a positive and natural theme, that goes over well with the FanStory demographic. It should be a strong contender.
I would suggest looking over that first stanza, and the second and fourth lines. No sure if they rhyme.
he'd climb it soon, put himself to the test.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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This is very nicely written, and it has a positive and natural theme, that goes over well with the FanStory demographic. It should be a strong contender.
I would suggest looking over that first stanza, and the second and fourth lines. No sure if they rhyme.
he'd climb it soon, put himself to the test.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you, I'll look it over. I always appreciate good advice and you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The freedom to reach any kind of summit fills us with euphoria as we achieve this kind of mammoth task. I am sure that anyone who is unfortunate enough to be in a wheelchair would appreciate this kind of freedom. A fine well rhymed poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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The freedom to reach any kind of summit fills us with euphoria as we achieve this kind of mammoth task. I am sure that anyone who is unfortunate enough to be in a wheelchair would appreciate this kind of freedom. A fine well rhymed poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much. I really like the use the words contest..although l probably don't need to write so much. Lol.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautifully written. I love how it builds up the journey step by step! The twist at the end was so powerful - it gave the whole poem a deeper meaning. I think it made me appreciate the journey even more.
Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Your poem is beautifully written. I love how it builds up the journey step by step! The twist at the end was so powerful - it gave the whole poem a deeper meaning. I think it made me appreciate the journey even more.
Well done!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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I appreciate this thoughtful review, thank you!
Comment from pome lover
WHO? and was it because he was hurt the reason I guess he's now in a wheelchair, or just old? Or is he dead? or is this fiction? I guess not since there's a picture.I especially love the last two lines of the 3rd verse. very nice!
Katharine
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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WHO? and was it because he was hurt the reason I guess he's now in a wheelchair, or just old? Or is he dead? or is this fiction? I guess not since there's a picture.I especially love the last two lines of the 3rd verse. very nice!
Katharine
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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It's fiction..a representation of all people who can't reach thier goals for one reason or another. He did it through a dream. Thanks for this great review. :)
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ah. thanks. :)
