The Christmas Baby
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Night Lights"Sam n Sarah get a baby with dire consequences
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is chapter has plenty of action from beginning to end, including a dreamscape. Sam's character feels relieved to be with his wife, Sarah, again and alone. But it seems one good night is all they are going to get, with that noise from the roof, whether or not it is coming from nearly innocent or nearly mischievous squirrels or not. And hopefully it was just a car making a turn from the driveway, but with the new onslaught of text messages, the reader wonders what Sam will have to respond to next. He's looking at his phone but not necessarily texting back as his wife catches him, or maybe she merely follows and looks over at him for a moment on the way to the bathroom, perhaps.
The only thing I noticed, but it was late at night when I read this, is that I would say "blood-curdling." Or else all one word: bloodcurdling.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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This is chapter has plenty of action from beginning to end, including a dreamscape. Sam's character feels relieved to be with his wife, Sarah, again and alone. But it seems one good night is all they are going to get, with that noise from the roof, whether or not it is coming from nearly innocent or nearly mischievous squirrels or not. And hopefully it was just a car making a turn from the driveway, but with the new onslaught of text messages, the reader wonders what Sam will have to respond to next. He's looking at his phone but not necessarily texting back as his wife catches him, or maybe she merely follows and looks over at him for a moment on the way to the bathroom, perhaps.
The only thing I noticed, but it was late at night when I read this, is that I would say "blood-curdling." Or else all one word: bloodcurdling.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much for this Crystie. I'm always excited to hear from you. You always review with helpful information and have best intentions. I need to say so on comments for reviewer of month too. Blessings...
Comment from royowen
How mysterious was this episode, Sam getting himself into trouble, by heis own consideration for his wife, who were those that were in the escaping, and who indeed were scurrying in there house? Beautifully written Stan, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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How mysterious was this episode, Sam getting himself into trouble, by heis own consideration for his wife, who were those that were in the escaping, and who indeed were scurrying in there house? Beautifully written Stan, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much Roy
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Well done
Comment from Jim Wile
Good chapter, Stan. Such a sweet scene between Sam and Sarah as all seems to be forgiven. A very tastefully done scene in bed too as they become reacquainted with each other sexually.
It seems like the secret has to come out soon now, and I wonder how this currently fragile relationship will hold up.
I liked the mystery of this night time disturbance.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Good chapter, Stan. Such a sweet scene between Sam and Sarah as all seems to be forgiven. A very tastefully done scene in bed too as they become reacquainted with each other sexually.
It seems like the secret has to come out soon now, and I wonder how this currently fragile relationship will hold up.
I liked the mystery of this night time disturbance.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much Jim.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you describe the tender reunion of this couple. They have been through so much that could have ruined their relationship and her mother made things worse. Still, there is a haunting feeling for Sam's sense of responsibility for Taylor and her baby. I wonder if the speeding car dropped off her baby to adopt?
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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I like how you describe the tender reunion of this couple. They have been through so much that could have ruined their relationship and her mother made things worse. Still, there is a haunting feeling for Sam's sense of responsibility for Taylor and her baby. I wonder if the speeding car dropped off her baby to adopt?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much. I appreciate to know that it plays out like that in the reader's mind.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Stan.
In the beginning Sam's enjoying some redemption with, and from his wife. Things may even be headed back to normal. He obviously enjoys the current situation. Things, regrettably, shift unexpectedly. His problem reared its ugly head once more. The stress on him is heavy. Words he might not want to hear are pulling him back to his fractured world. The tension builds. Nice job of placing this in the story.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Stan.
In the beginning Sam's enjoying some redemption with, and from his wife. Things may even be headed back to normal. He obviously enjoys the current situation. Things, regrettably, shift unexpectedly. His problem reared its ugly head once more. The stress on him is heavy. Words he might not want to hear are pulling him back to his fractured world. The tension builds. Nice job of placing this in the story.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mistydawn
He might be in the doghouse again. I sure hope not. Your story is well-written, very interesting. I loved how you added little pieces of their history it made them seem more realistic relatable. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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He might be in the doghouse again. I sure hope not. Your story is well-written, very interesting. I loved how you added little pieces of their history it made them seem more realistic relatable. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much Misty.
Comment from patcelaw
You are doing a very good job of keeping us in suspense and I am very much enjoying your story. It flows very well when it is read aloud and it sends chills ofpleasure up and down my spine to hear the words as are spoken. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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You are doing a very good job of keeping us in suspense and I am very much enjoying your story. It flows very well when it is read aloud and it sends chills ofpleasure up and down my spine to hear the words as are spoken. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks Pat over exactly what you said. I appreciate it so much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sam needs to be honest with his wife. And it's almost too late to be honest. I have a feeling this dream meant something. What will he do now. I can't wait to find out. Great writing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Sam needs to be honest with his wife. And it's almost too late to be honest. I have a feeling this dream meant something. What will he do now. I can't wait to find out. Great writing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks Barbara.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such an emotional read! You've created a deeply intimate story.
The difference between Sam's tender moments with Sarah and the eerie dream sequence is so well done. It kept me on edge. This feels like the beginning of something much bigger - what's Sam about to uncover? Incredible book so far!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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This is such an emotional read! You've created a deeply intimate story.
The difference between Sam's tender moments with Sarah and the eerie dream sequence is so well done. It kept me on edge. This feels like the beginning of something much bigger - what's Sam about to uncover? Incredible book so far!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thanks Michael. Much appreciated
