Haunted Mind
I now she will haunt me forever.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Ah, it is so sad when love does not work out the way we had hoped- a deep sense of loss pervades these stanzas- the final two lines confirming the real fears of the poet
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Ah, it is so sad when love does not work out the way we had hoped- a deep sense of loss pervades these stanzas- the final two lines confirming the real fears of the poet
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the read and review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very sensitive and authentic and well presented. Just remember there might be another love that will see this some day lol just kidding Good work!
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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This is very sensitive and authentic and well presented. Just remember there might be another love that will see this some day lol just kidding Good work!
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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You are so right, there can be other loves, but it is difficult to forget the first one. Thanks for read and feedback.
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That's true for good or for bad. That is true.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our memories sometimes haunt us in a good way and it seems also a bad way too. It is hard to lose a loved one as the finality of death can break our heart. A touching post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Our memories sometimes haunt us in a good way and it seems also a bad way too. It is hard to lose a loved one as the finality of death can break our heart. A touching post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Oh, yes, good haunting is preferred. Thanks for the feedback.xxx
