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A Flight of Misfortune

Be careful what you wish for!

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This fifty-word story, A Flight of Misfortune, has the required word count and finds that Richard has fallen into the third-wish "trap" which last saw a man become a stud in a wall. *

*Old third wish joke.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Hi Bill
    Many thanks for your review of my 50 word entry.
    Bless you and stay safe.
Comment from Tim Margetts
Excellent
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This is fun, mystery writer.
I am not sure if these are the thoughts of a sentient clay, or some person's unlucky wish result.
It made me chuckle, whichever, so well done on that.
Good luck with your entry in the contest
Tim

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
    Hi Tim
    Thank you for your review of my 150 word story.
    Blessings.
Comment from giraffmang
Good
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Hi there,

You might want to recheck your word count for this one. The body of the work comes in at 49 words and it needs to be exactly 50 words to qualify.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
    Hi GMG
    Thank you for your message. You are quite right about the word count. I have made an adjustment.
    Kind regards