The Bed Pan
A Short Story5 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt. LOL I really enjoyed this one. What a great comparison! Very good job on this flash story.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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An excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt. LOL I really enjoyed this one. What a great comparison! Very good job on this flash story.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Mia Twysted
That's an interesting comparison between peeing in a tiny white container and writing a small number of words on a page. I do not think I would have gone in that direction.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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That's an interesting comparison between peeing in a tiny white container and writing a small number of words on a page. I do not think I would have gone in that direction.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much
Comment from Yolanda King
I totally agree! LOL Funny, precise and to the point. You're all hyped up only to be let down. It's a rude awakening. If this is your usual sense of humor, I like it.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I totally agree! LOL Funny, precise and to the point. You're all hyped up only to be let down. It's a rude awakening. If this is your usual sense of humor, I like it.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You should try balancing on those cold stainless steel dishes they have for the women, thankfully I've not needed to do that for a while. An amusing fifty words story and you built it up well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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You should try balancing on those cold stainless steel dishes they have for the women, thankfully I've not needed to do that for a while. An amusing fifty words story and you built it up well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Ha! I could only go on experience, thank you very much
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story and supportive photo presentation for the challenge. It has the proper syllables. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I'm trying to be done with hospitals as I'm in remission from MS in my late 20s and 30s, hospital infusions were my life. So I could understand this. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Keep well!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent story and supportive photo presentation for the challenge. It has the proper syllables. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I'm trying to be done with hospitals as I'm in remission from MS in my late 20s and 30s, hospital infusions were my life. So I could understand this. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Keep well!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you, I hope you are doing well, I have tried peeing in those things, funny how white sheets turn yellow Ha! Ha!
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lol It's humbling for sure. I am doing wellright now since 2010. I must take preventative shots at home yuck but I am doing better than when I was having one attack alter another blindness, bad balance. So I am thankful now when I should be feeling "older." Not a bad twist. I appreciate you asking and discussing.
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Stay well
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Thank you very much!
