Pie-Eating Contest
One last win3 total reviews
Comment from Yolanda King
Oh, I really like this! I want to read more. I was disappointed to see that it was only a 50 word story. It plunges you right into the action. It's great!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Oh, I really like this! I want to read more. I was disappointed to see that it was only a 50 word story. It plunges you right into the action. It's great!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
Comment from jmdg1954
Whoa... this turned to the dark side very quickly.
Hmmm, I wonder if someone poisoned his apple pie in order to rid themselves from him.
It's going to make me think next time I have apple pie.
Good luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Whoa... this turned to the dark side very quickly.
Hmmm, I wonder if someone poisoned his apple pie in order to rid themselves from him.
It's going to make me think next time I have apple pie.
Good luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from jessizero
I don't know what to say except "eep!" You managed to set the stage and pull off a twist ending in just fifty words. I am impressed. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I don't know what to say except "eep!" You managed to set the stage and pull off a twist ending in just fifty words. I am impressed. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I am so glad you liked it.
