Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 15 syllable poem. Everyone is chasing the fountain of youth. I will just age gracefully without face lift. The poem appears to have the correct syllable count.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
Thank you!! I think I'm the same as you, I'll be okay without the facelift. I'd rather look old than terrifying like some of those celebrities who have taken plastic surgery too far!
Comment from
Teri7
This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest about aging. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
reply by Teri7 on 17-Mar-2025