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Empty swing..

10 word poem about children

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a very moving post. Well presented in black and white and resonating sadness and loss with the idling sway of the swing and echoes of laughter. Well done and good luck:) Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
    Thank you dear Debbie <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I wonder where the children have gone here, perhaps this is empty nest syndrome as the children have grown up and left home? A poignant poem for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a great 10 word children's poem. It is true that when they grow up all we have is the memories and like you state, "Children's laughter echos"


Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025