Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy

Excellent

Nicely constructed and presented, and the video you included is also really entertaining and well produced. I'm gonna watch the rest of it while reviewing today. Making nature music videos for a living wouldn't be a bad gig.

I like the little rhyme in there too. Ardent is a pretty decent adjective. For fun, look up "ribald". It's an awesome alternate alliterating adjective.

Thanks for sharing,

🦍

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025

Thanks for the helpful feedback , Harambe !

"Ribald " is a great word ..

I clearly need to enrich my vocabulary.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is absolutely lovely! I really enjoyed the way you shared spring in such a short poem. The use of "pantomine" to describe spring is clever! This feels like a snapshot of spring's beauty. It made me smile and feel the warmth of the season! Keep sharing your beautiful writing!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025

I appreciate the enthusiasm. After a long gloomy winter , I can’t wait for the verve of Spring.

Coming soon Father’s Day on the 19 th of March and then on the 21st Spring officially starts !

Yeah!

Comment from Tim Margetts

Excellent

Ahh the joys of spring.
Mother nature is a wonderful host and keeps on giving despite our constant abuse.
This time of year brings so much joy and freshness, new growth and the hopes of new generations.
I just wish my dog wasn't in heat.
Tim

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025

I have had many pets but strictly males with two exceptions .. one female puppy dumbed in front of my front gate in a box and a stray kitten I saved.

We got them both sterilised as soon as possible but for some reason I still had dogs some times following the female dog just the same.

Why didn’t you sterilise her after her first litter?