The Privileged, The Damned
A 10-word poem2 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow! That's powerful in a very way! So few words that pack a punch. Really good. Really sad too in time and place its written. I hope the conflict ends soon.
Quite a twist in subject matter or the two wrapped together! great word choices with a good picture.
Thanks so much and good luck!
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Wow! That's powerful in a very way! So few words that pack a punch. Really good. Really sad too in time and place its written. I hope the conflict ends soon.
Quite a twist in subject matter or the two wrapped together! great word choices with a good picture.
Thanks so much and good luck!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
Comment from Stacy M.S.
I always have trouble with short poetry, especially when I try to pare what I want to say down to so few words. However, I think you did so exceptionally well. The artwork you provided also helped get your point across.
I agree with the plight of childhood these days. The well-to-do are in a technological war with gadgets and mindless toys while the disadvantage struggle to survive.
Doubly difficult when you think in terms of a child whose brain is not even fully developed. Makes you wonder which of the two evils are more damaging.
Excellent work.
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I always have trouble with short poetry, especially when I try to pare what I want to say down to so few words. However, I think you did so exceptionally well. The artwork you provided also helped get your point across.
I agree with the plight of childhood these days. The well-to-do are in a technological war with gadgets and mindless toys while the disadvantage struggle to survive.
Doubly difficult when you think in terms of a child whose brain is not even fully developed. Makes you wonder which of the two evils are more damaging.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
