True Love
5/7/5 Modern Haiku - Romance3 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
Well composed, as this verse portrays a beautiful response to such succinct limitations of the prompt. The charming attractions of true love in spring keep mere mortals ever to romantic, with happy memories.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Well composed, as this verse portrays a beautiful response to such succinct limitations of the prompt. The charming attractions of true love in spring keep mere mortals ever to romantic, with happy memories.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind review Jilie, and for your time - very much appreciated - Bless
Comment from jessizero
It looks like you got the syllable count down perfectly for this "modern haiku." Your poem was wonderful and it made me sigh. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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It looks like you got the syllable count down perfectly for this "modern haiku." Your poem was wonderful and it made me sigh. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much jessi for your kind review, and for your time - very much appreciated - Bless
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so fun. I love the last line! So funny. The first two lines are so soft and dreamy! Then the last one brings a surprise that made me smile. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Your poem is so fun. I love the last line! So funny. The first two lines are so soft and dreamy! Then the last one brings a surprise that made me smile. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you Michael for your kind review, and for your time - very much appreciated - Bless
