Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great 2-4-4-12 poem. It appears that you have the syllable count correct. This is a well organized poem and it flows nicely from beginning to end.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025

Thank you, Cecilia. Hope you're having a wonderful Sunday.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 09-Mar-2025

You're welcome

Comment from Sir Bobbykins

Good

I understand all too well the emptiness that arrives over the absence of one whose presence you're accustomed to. You are a marvelous conveyor in this because you manage to express profoundly in so limited a space. I commend you on the imagery you managed to instill as well. Best of luck in the writing prompt!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025

Thank you. Hope you're having a great day.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

W sometimes lose sight of ourselves in life and to find our true path we have to rethink our situation. I enjoyed your short poem, delivering a message that many will identify with, we can't run away from ourselves, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Yes, I've seen too many people lose themselves to later have a desire to find themselves.
Better late than never.
Thank you for reviewing this.