Nature's Battle
A 2-4-4-12 Poem4 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 2-4-4-12 poem. It appears that you have the syllable count correct. This is a well organized poem and it flows nicely from beginning to end.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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This is a great 2-4-4-12 poem. It appears that you have the syllable count correct. This is a well organized poem and it flows nicely from beginning to end.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
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You're welcome
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent!! This is a well written poem for the challenge. Your photo image presentation is good, too. You use good descriptive imagery. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Excellent!! This is a well written poem for the challenge. Your photo image presentation is good, too. You use good descriptive imagery. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Alex. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great! I love how your poem shares the change from winter to spring. I gave it six stars because I don't think I've ever read something that shares this change in the season in such a unique way. The way you describe winter "reluctantly" retreating while spring secretly plans her move is so clever! I can feel the anticipation. Keep writing, I really enjoy this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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This is great! I love how your poem shares the change from winter to spring. I gave it six stars because I don't think I've ever read something that shares this change in the season in such a unique way. The way you describe winter "reluctantly" retreating while spring secretly plans her move is so clever! I can feel the anticipation. Keep writing, I really enjoy this poem.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Michael. I consider it quite an honor to receive a sixth rating from FanStory's #1 Rated Reviewer. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sentiment in this post, the picture is adorable, but spring awaits under the snow and there will be no stopping those determined blooms poking through the freeze to turn the season into spring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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I love the sentiment in this post, the picture is adorable, but spring awaits under the snow and there will be no stopping those determined blooms poking through the freeze to turn the season into spring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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You read my mind with your review, Dolly. Thank you so much!
