An Obscure Day
Navigating through the urban forest9 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Simple yet the poem says so much. On gray days like your poem describes I feel sick. I know it's in my mind, but I can't help it. Your poem is very relatable. The picture adds that special touch.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Simple yet the poem says so much. On gray days like your poem describes I feel sick. I know it's in my mind, but I can't help it. Your poem is very relatable. The picture adds that special touch.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your review! Yes, this image captivates a sense of quieting our soul with a wishful hope of early spring!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, An Obscure Day, has the proper formatting and brings the idea of a foggy afternoon to mind between the wording and the overcast photograph.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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This 1-6-1, An Obscure Day, has the proper formatting and brings the idea of a foggy afternoon to mind between the wording and the overcast photograph.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you Bill for your kind review! It's well appreciated!
Comment from zanya
Wow this short format really captures the ambiance on an Obscure Day complete with lovely canine - so well told here and with added rhyming scheme- has my vote
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Wow this short format really captures the ambiance on an Obscure Day complete with lovely canine - so well told here and with added rhyming scheme- has my vote
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you Zanya for your generous review! It's very much appreciated!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. I love the rhyme scheme it works really well throughout this short 1-6-1 poem. The picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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This is a great poem. I love the rhyme scheme it works really well throughout this short 1-6-1 poem. The picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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I appreciate your kind review Cecilia! It's very encouraging!
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You're welcome
Comment from Tim Margetts
What a spookily eerie picture you have used to illustrate your words.
While the poem describes well the scene, the image asks so many more questions. A good combination indeed.
Tim
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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What a spookily eerie picture you have used to illustrate your words.
While the poem describes well the scene, the image asks so many more questions. A good combination indeed.
Tim
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you Tim for your wonderful review! Yes, the image is rather thought provoking!
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Wow! I don't know what comes first (the picture or the poem) but they compliments each other so well. Makes me what to cozy up in my PJs with a cup of tea (or wine) and read a book or write something . Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Wow! I don't know what comes first (the picture or the poem) but they compliments each other so well. Makes me what to cozy up in my PJs with a cup of tea (or wine) and read a book or write something . Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you Anna for your kind review!
And yes, on a day such as this, It's easy to rest our minds and bodies with a good book and cup of tea. ♡
Comment from Stacy M.S.
Aw, I think this is outstanding in it's simplicity.
The gray tones of the photo help set the scene.
Am totally feeling your gray tones.
Perfectly written!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Aw, I think this is outstanding in it's simplicity.
The gray tones of the photo help set the scene.
Am totally feeling your gray tones.
Perfectly written!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind review Stacy!
It's very encouraging! ♡
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I love that these six words are so descriptive. I can literally almost see and feel the day described. Great work! Good luck with this piece and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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I love that these six words are so descriptive. I can literally almost see and feel the day described. Great work! Good luck with this piece and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you Lindsay for your kind review! It's encouraging! ♡
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We see many days like this during the winter months in England and we tire of the greys and pray for spring when colour comes back to life, I enjoyed your rhymes as the colour drained from this poem, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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We see many days like this during the winter months in England and we tire of the greys and pray for spring when colour comes back to life, I enjoyed your rhymes as the colour drained from this poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Greetings to you in England and thank you for your kind review! ♡
