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Massacre Victims

a 1-6-1 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I remember in 1999 teaching in a high school and Columbine happened in Colorado. It's only gotten worse. This is an excellent poem and presentation for the challenge with good rhyming. The image supports your words well. Its an importantpost. Best wishes to you!

Alex

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
    Columbine seems like an aeon ago, Alex. There have been so many massacres of school children since. Many thanks for your praise of my poem.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 06-Mar-2025
    Yes certainly. I've taught for all those decades. All the drills etc started long ago and continue. Most Americans support common sense gun regulations. We've let decades of children die.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 06-Mar-2025
    You're welcome about the post.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem, but so very sad for all those young people! You used great descriptive words and the pictures made it even more real! Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
    Thank you very much, Teri, for sharing and praising my poem.