Mangled Love
Two lovers that cannot be together.5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gina
This short poem decidedly describes a relationship that needs to end.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice day.
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Hi Gina
This short poem decidedly describes a relationship that needs to end.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice day.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank u!
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My pleasure, Gina
Joan
Comment from ANINDITA BISWAS
Loved the metaphors in this poem. Perfect fifteen syllables. The short poem brigs out the complete story behind it. Well deserved! Hope to read more such beautiful poems from you.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Loved the metaphors in this poem. Perfect fifteen syllables. The short poem brigs out the complete story behind it. Well deserved! Hope to read more such beautiful poems from you.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank u!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much!!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is short but so powerful! I love how you share the intensity of heartache with just a few words. The line "pierced by life's sharp thorns" really hits hard. Keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Your poem is short but so powerful! I love how you share the intensity of heartache with just a few words. The line "pierced by life's sharp thorns" really hits hard. Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
Author, this piece is really great. The metaphor is effective, as is the rhyming, and I liked the bonus rhyme in the title.
A couple small suggestions: ditch all the periods (most importantly in in the subtitle) and consider a larger font. Perhaps experiment with some different background colors too; though the current one is alright, perhaps you could come up with something more visually vivid.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the voters,
🦍
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Author, this piece is really great. The metaphor is effective, as is the rhyming, and I liked the bonus rhyme in the title.
A couple small suggestions: ditch all the periods (most importantly in in the subtitle) and consider a larger font. Perhaps experiment with some different background colors too; though the current one is alright, perhaps you could come up with something more visually vivid.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the voters,
🦍
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much!
