Blues and More
Erotic News2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story took me on a wild ride! The opening was unexpected. And just when I thought I knew where it was going - you flipped everything with that twist. The way you including the lyrics was such a clever touch. Great writing - totally unique and unforgettable!
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Your story took me on a wild ride! The opening was unexpected. And just when I thought I knew where it was going - you flipped everything with that twist. The way you including the lyrics was such a clever touch. Great writing - totally unique and unforgettable!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from lancellot
This is a strange one. It is light on the eroticism, but considering what Benjy had in mind that night, I believe it qualifies for the contest. I suppose even at eighty-four there some women who still has the need. I hope that includes me and the wife when we get there.
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This is a strange one. It is light on the eroticism, but considering what Benjy had in mind that night, I believe it qualifies for the contest. I suppose even at eighty-four there some women who still has the need. I hope that includes me and the wife when we get there.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
