Spring break
Natural rhythm4 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a sweet short poem. I don't know if the picture accompanying it fits though. When I read this poem, I envision the green leaves of a maple tree waving in a breeze on a sunny summer day. The title, however, says, "Spring Break." So I can see how palm trees would accompany a poem of that title. But having "summer" in the poem reminds me of deciduous trees, like maples and ash trees. Regardless, I can feel the heat, which is something I cannot wait to arrive!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025
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What a sweet short poem. I don't know if the picture accompanying it fits though. When I read this poem, I envision the green leaves of a maple tree waving in a breeze on a sunny summer day. The title, however, says, "Spring Break." So I can see how palm trees would accompany a poem of that title. But having "summer" in the poem reminds me of deciduous trees, like maples and ash trees. Regardless, I can feel the heat, which is something I cannot wait to arrive!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025
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You are right about the picture. I settled. It was the best I could find. Thanks for your review.
Comment from zanya
Summer's getting ever closer and with its arrival will come the gentler breezes of that blessed season and oh how we look forward to that time of year
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Summer's getting ever closer and with its arrival will come the gentler breezes of that blessed season and oh how we look forward to that time of year
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love that! There's something so peaceful about the idea of leaves dancing in the breeze. It feels like they're part of a secret performance just for the world to enjoy. You say so much with only seven words. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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I love that! There's something so peaceful about the idea of leaves dancing in the breeze. It feels like they're part of a secret performance just for the world to enjoy. You say so much with only seven words. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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I appreciate your review so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I thinkI like these kind of leaves here as palm trees remind me of holidays, I enjoyed your fine presentation here, an uplifting post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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I thinkI like these kind of leaves here as palm trees remind me of holidays, I enjoyed your fine presentation here, an uplifting post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much.
