Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "The Pieces that fit"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and it flows very well and it is read loud. The fact that you use a lot of dialogue in your story, makes it a very interesting read. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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This is very nicely written and it flows very well and it is read loud. The fact that you use a lot of dialogue in your story, makes it a very interesting read. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your week. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you Patricia - have a wonderful day
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your chapter pulls me in right away! I really love the tension you create between Terry, Hayes, and Mark. It feels like I'm right there in the room with them. The back and forth is so natural. I can feel Terry's growing suspicions. The twist with Terry's father had me on the edge of my seat! I'm excited to see where this goes next! Keep up the awesome work.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Your chapter pulls me in right away! I really love the tension you create between Terry, Hayes, and Mark. It feels like I'm right there in the room with them. The back and forth is so natural. I can feel Terry's growing suspicions. The twist with Terry's father had me on the edge of my seat! I'm excited to see where this goes next! Keep up the awesome work.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you Michael - its almost done!
