Lipstick Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Unraveling Shadows"After a lifetime of suffering, Tess’s world shatte
4 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you brought Toni and Jamal to life with their dialogue about cop shows made them feel so real. The crime scene details were gripping. I loved how Toni reassured the rookie. Her kindness toward the struggling mother really stood out. Can't wait to see where this goes next. Keep writing - you've got something great here!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you brought Toni and Jamal to life with their dialogue about cop shows made them feel so real. The crime scene details were gripping. I loved how Toni reassured the rookie. Her kindness toward the struggling mother really stood out. Can't wait to see where this goes next. Keep writing - you've got something great here!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Thank you for such a sweet review. I'm glad all the characters seem realistic, relatable. I think that's one of the hardest things about writing making the characters well-rounded, believable. Tess found a new friend and more targets. Guess there's good and bad to everything. Thank you again for reading my story, your continuous support. It does mean so much to me, take care.
Comment from royowen
I like the detail of the investigation, the step by step process of investigation, speaks of a thoroughly researched methodology. Getting in the mind of vengeful people, is probably something we've probably all experienced at some point in our lives, is a good touch, it's acting on it thst makes the difference, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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I like the detail of the investigation, the step by step process of investigation, speaks of a thoroughly researched methodology. Getting in the mind of vengeful people, is probably something we've probably all experienced at some point in our lives, is a good touch, it's acting on it thst makes the difference, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter. In one of my stories In the mind of someone who was very paranoid that was scary. It did give me a different perspective on people who have this mental disease. Thank you again for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
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That's true
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Thank you for reading my chapter. In one of my stories In the mind of someone who was very paranoid that was scary. It did give me a different perspective on people who have this mental disease. Thank you again for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
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Welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! The crime scene details pulled me in right away. I could feel the tension as Toni and Jamal pieced things together. Tess's scene added such a heartfelt moment. The moment with Henry and the snowball was such a sweet touch. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! The crime scene details pulled me in right away. I could feel the tension as Toni and Jamal pieced things together. Tess's scene added such a heartfelt moment. The moment with Henry and the snowball was such a sweet touch. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep writing!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I watch a lot of Law and order, lol can you tell? I wanted to show Tess's fun, softer side and a motive to why she's continuing her plan. I'm happy to know I accomplished that. Thank you again, for such wonderful encouraging words, take care.
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Thank you for reading my chapter, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I watch a lot of Law and order, lol can you tell? I wanted to show Tess's fun, softer side and a motive to why she's continuing her plan. I'm happy to know I accomplished that. Thank you again, for such wonderful encouraging words, take care.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it flows very well when it is being red out loud. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with your writing. This particular piece you have written with very good sentence structure, and very good paragraphing so it makes a good piece to listen to may you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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This is very well written and it flows very well when it is being red out loud. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with your writing. This particular piece you have written with very good sentence structure, and very good paragraphing so it makes a good piece to listen to may you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you for listening to my story. I'm pleased to know that it does well in audio. Maybe that's something I should look into when it's done, hmm. Thank you again for all your support and your kind reviews, take care.
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Thank you for listening to my story. I'm pleased to know that it does well in audio. Maybe that's something I should look into when it's done, hmm. Thank you again for all your support and your kind reviews, take care.
