Rainbow view
Rainbow view15 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words create a beautiful picture of nature. I like your last line about the rainbow having a view, it is as if the rainbow is a live character. Excellent use of words and you create a clear picture with emotions and feelings in a short poem.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Your words create a beautiful picture of nature. I like your last line about the rainbow having a view, it is as if the rainbow is a live character. Excellent use of words and you create a clear picture with emotions and feelings in a short poem.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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thank you so much for your beautiful review
Comment from nancyjam
I love the imagery in each line of your 15 syllable poem.
Whispering rain, glowing dew petals and paintedrainbows. All feel good images.
Lovely.
Best of luck in the contest
Nancy
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I love the imagery in each line of your 15 syllable poem.
Whispering rain, glowing dew petals and paintedrainbows. All feel good images.
Lovely.
Best of luck in the contest
Nancy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
Comment from teafor2
Iza, your attentive title, multi-colored spectrum picture, spring theme and
affable tone 15 syllable ditty, pays enthralling homage to mother nature. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
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Iza, your attentive title, multi-colored spectrum picture, spring theme and
affable tone 15 syllable ditty, pays enthralling homage to mother nature. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this is a very beautiful write and I could feel the words are specifically chosen to say say something.
Dews and petals of dew, rain whispers...and hope. For some rain is a nuisance, having had to much but here it brings comfort ,hope...beautiful.
Benny
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Hi this is a very beautiful write and I could feel the words are specifically chosen to say say something.
Dews and petals of dew, rain whispers...and hope. For some rain is a nuisance, having had to much but here it brings comfort ,hope...beautiful.
Benny
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem and supportive photo presentation. It has the proper syllables. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
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This is an excellent poem and supportive photo presentation. It has the proper syllables. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. Very nice descriptions that gives the reader great mental imagery. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. Very nice descriptions that gives the reader great mental imagery. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from jessizero
You got the poem written in fifteen syllables exactly. I loved your imagery in this piece. The rain's whispering was especially lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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You got the poem written in fifteen syllables exactly. I loved your imagery in this piece. The rain's whispering was especially lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your presentation, entry, itself, and the message are all wonderful. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this ray of hope as a contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
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Your presentation, entry, itself, and the message are all wonderful. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this ray of hope as a contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from kahpot
"Rain whispers hope," What a wonderful line, hope, growth, and life's necessity, an excellent short poem and message, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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"Rain whispers hope," What a wonderful line, hope, growth, and life's necessity, an excellent short poem and message, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Iza,
This is a beautiful poem. Even though it is a short poem the words speak loud and clear. The picture you chose is spot on and compliments the poem nicely.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Iza,
This is a beautiful poem. Even though it is a short poem the words speak loud and clear. The picture you chose is spot on and compliments the poem nicely.
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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I love dew and summer rain:) gives me joy
