Low Hanging Fruit
Choices, free verse33 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Ah but the low hanging fruit always tastes the best Don lol
Sorry
Couldn't resist that one
Nice work my friend
Hope life is treating you well
Hugs P x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Ah but the low hanging fruit always tastes the best Don lol
Sorry
Couldn't resist that one
Nice work my friend
Hope life is treating you well
Hugs P x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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I am so blessed to hear from you. It has been a very long time, I miss you and your work my friend.
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lol me too
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderful advice and what a beautiful testimony all wrapped up into one! ;) Well done, sir!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your faithful message in such a beautiful free verse! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Wonderful advice and what a beautiful testimony all wrapped up into one! ;) Well done, sir!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your faithful message in such a beautiful free verse! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Yvette.
Comment from teafor2
DonandVicki, your title, picture and cautionary words are both heady and wise. The totality of your theme and tone is pious as it depicts the end
of man's sinless beginning...Ordained, this act that led to man's salvation
according to the Bible. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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DonandVicki, your title, picture and cautionary words are both heady and wise. The totality of your theme and tone is pious as it depicts the end
of man's sinless beginning...Ordained, this act that led to man's salvation
according to the Bible. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Tea, for your kind and insightful review.
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You are welcome, DonandVicki. teafor2
Comment from Begin Again
We all make choices-some difficult and others easier-but we are all faced with them every day. Hopefully, before a decision is made, we don't just think of how we think we would like it to be, but how God thinks it should be.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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We all make choices-some difficult and others easier-but we are all faced with them every day. Hopefully, before a decision is made, we don't just think of how we think we would like it to be, but how God thinks it should be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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k you
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yes, God gives us free will.
This is a poem with few syllables but it conveys a true message. Many will relate. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Yes, God gives us free will.
This is a poem with few syllables but it conveys a true message. Many will relate. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Alex, for your kind and insightful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine biblical write with warm caring undertones here and I enjoyed the sentiment and advice in this free verse for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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A fine biblical write with warm caring undertones here and I enjoyed the sentiment and advice in this free verse for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Dolly, I always enjoy your reviews.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like your free verse, and I know for sure that I have a very hard time to distinguish my free will and my action :"se your free will wisely
Take heed lest passion
Sway your good judgment." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I like your free verse, and I know for sure that I have a very hard time to distinguish my free will and my action :"se your free will wisely
Take heed lest passion
Sway your good judgment." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your kind and insightful review.
Comment from Boogienights
Very nicely done and so true. We all must make choices in this life, but it's best to take God into consideration...he may have different plans. The very best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Very nicely done and so true. We all must make choices in this life, but it's best to take God into consideration...he may have different plans. The very best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Boogie.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"If you are without care
Give thanks to God
To continue in paradise"... Amen!
In this world, it sure seems folks are looking for that 'low-hanging fruit' a lot, doesn't it? Wonderful message! Publish this gem all over!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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"If you are without care
Give thanks to God
To continue in paradise"... Amen!
In this world, it sure seems folks are looking for that 'low-hanging fruit' a lot, doesn't it? Wonderful message! Publish this gem all over!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed the comments in your review, thank you.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A deep message, simply put. God gives us all choices, and that is a great gift. It's up to us what to do with it! That was a good point, put well, but, there is a bit more to your post -- the advice. Don't pick that easy fruit!! The bad things really are often the easiest, or laziest choices.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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A deep message, simply put. God gives us all choices, and that is a great gift. It's up to us what to do with it! That was a good point, put well, but, there is a bit more to your post -- the advice. Don't pick that easy fruit!! The bad things really are often the easiest, or laziest choices.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Rhonda.
