BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "Glorious Cheese"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from patcelaw
And nicely written chapter for the book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful week.
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And nicely written chapter for the book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful week.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
An adorable renga poem for chesse lovers young and old. This has a childlike snap to it. Love it! Chesse is the life. I wish I could have some! Dang it!
Sending you my cheesy best today as always, and best wedges for your nibbling day.
Sal ;))
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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An adorable renga poem for chesse lovers young and old. This has a childlike snap to it. Love it! Chesse is the life. I wish I could have some! Dang it!
Sending you my cheesy best today as always, and best wedges for your nibbling day.
Sal ;))
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, I do love cheese myself, particularly, the stinky ones. lol
RJ
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha the mouse is so cute :)
Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Hahaha the mouse is so cute :)
Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, it was fun.
RJ
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so fun! I love how you've given the mouse such a delightful moment with "fabulous cheese." It made me grin imagining how happy the mouse must feel! Wonderful job - keep having fun with your writing! We are!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Your poem is so fun! I love how you've given the mouse such a delightful moment with "fabulous cheese." It made me grin imagining how happy the mouse must feel! Wonderful job - keep having fun with your writing! We are!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement.
RJ
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
It might be a life for a mouse but it's also a life for ME! lol I haven;t been able to eat cheese for going on three months because of this darn pneumonia and I am losing my mind! Cute poem and pic.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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It might be a life for a mouse but it's also a life for ME! lol I haven;t been able to eat cheese for going on three months because of this darn pneumonia and I am losing my mind! Cute poem and pic.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Oh, I'm so sorry, really I am. I like the really odd ones, like Blue cheese, Feta, Munster, and so on. I am not a big fan of cheddar.
RJ
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Me too!! blue cheese is my all time favorite. I haven't acquired as much of a liking for Feta but I'm trying. I even like the stinky cheeses. lol
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I like the stinky ones. Not surprising, because I also like truffles.
RJ
