Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

That is a remarkable photograph you have taken on Lake Superior. Of course it is a stunning complement to a fine addition to the Renga book. They almost look like strange birds.

Thank you for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review. That was in 2019 and I have taken many strange ice formations. We were there last Christmas but nothing was like this.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.

Well done!

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review. Just posted a new 7/7 and hope you like it.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Lisa. I enjoyed reading your Renga poem that you infused with your lovely style of writing. Well done on the form and presentation. A lovely read!

Melissa

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Love the sculpting of nature... art in so many forms! ;) A great follow-on here, my lady!! ;) It snowed here in Dixie last night so we're enjoying a rare, personal glimpse and feel of the white stuff! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and keeping it going! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review. Yes. Snow is wonderful. We had some new one, too. We went skiing two days in a row.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Mother Nature does tend to do some beautiful artwork. The photograph is amazing. You already know how I feel about your photography. I enjoyed reading the poem. The poem describes the photograph perfectly.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review. Yes. I'm retiring and will try to do something with the photos. The beautiful nature inspired me.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

That's a very unusual photo of ice sculptures! Your poem highlights it beautifully in this Renga chapter. Your photographs are outstanding. Continue to share them!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

What an amazing visual, Lisa! Weirdly beautiful, your 7-7 verse skilfully captures its quiet, sculptured purity with style. Well done and thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nicely written chapter for the book and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is very well presented. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your weekend. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-line poem, Natural's Ice Sculpture, has the proper formatting and examines the forces of heat, cold, thrust, and the other dynamics of the physical world.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

That's a great picture. And a great description for your turn on this chapter poem book that goes on and on!
I've been to Grand Marais but never in the winter.


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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thanks a lot for this great review.