Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Loved it so much that I had to follow it, my lady!! ;) And at least the naturalists got this group name right: a fluff of rabbits indeed!! ;) Thanx for sharing and for keeping us in line! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Nature has taken care of Fluff's food, shelter, and has also provide him with drink in the dew. Such is the nature of Mother Nature. Thank you for sharing. Hope you're having a good day.
RJ

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 11-Jan-2025

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Ha! Ha! I am not sure if these are meant to be humorous, but this one caught my funny bone, I used to trap rabbits for a living, (many years ago)
and never thought of carrots as bait, ****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

So cute and one can virtually feel the fluffiness of the image! Love the concept of Fluff cuddling up to his carrots. Did you mean s(l)ip? Lovely Renga verse for the book. I must do one (notably, snow is still around and we haven't marched into spring yet?) Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thank you very much 😊 I fixed it.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the feel of these two lines - cuddly and warm...

a couple things i noticed...

chilled drops sip through rabbit hole -- did you mean SEEP through?

where fluff cuddles by carrots - unsure about this line...
did you mean...
"where fluff's cuddled by carrots"?
"where fluff cuddles carrots"?


hope you're safe from the fires!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Oh boy, I messed up. It's all fixed now.

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I didn't know this. That is an adorable name for a group of rabbits. The presentation matches well. I hope to create another Renga poem again soon. People really enjoy these, myself included. Thinking of you, Alexan x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy