The Kirby Case - Part 3
A homicide detective tries to catch a serial killer29 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This story is truly gripping. You are able to describe the evidence, the difficulties faced, and how clues are processed, all in rhythmic poetry, This is enjoyable and entertaining.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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This story is truly gripping. You are able to describe the evidence, the difficulties faced, and how clues are processed, all in rhythmic poetry, This is enjoyable and entertaining.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you again, LJ for your encouragement as I take this epic journey
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is another great rhymed chapter with some great information to help the detective hopefully catch this killer soon. You are doing a great job on this my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Pam, This is another great rhymed chapter with some great information to help the detective hopefully catch this killer soon. You are doing a great job on this my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the encouraging review
Comment from Sugarray77
Your rhyming detective story is very good and I really like your inclusion of rhyme. It's unique and interesting. Thanks for the notes too, they really add depth to the piece.
Melissa
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Your rhyming detective story is very good and I really like your inclusion of rhyme. It's unique and interesting. Thanks for the notes too, they really add depth to the piece.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you again, Melissa for following along and for the great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, these are pretty young girls who take care of themselves. Is this serial killer still on the loose? I noticed you are writing many poems about this case Pam, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Oh my goodness, these are pretty young girls who take care of themselves. Is this serial killer still on the loose? I noticed you are writing many poems about this case Pam, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hi, Dolly, this is fictional. I will specify that in my future chapter.
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A fascinating series Pam, I hope the killer is caught soon x x x
Comment from Karen Cherry
This poem is much better, but I cannot give a six as there is no spacing making it difficult to read. The writing is , or should be 80% of the grade. Then picture, font type, font color, font size, writing structure and grammer, and matting make up the other twenty percent. Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This poem is much better, but I cannot give a six as there is no spacing making it difficult to read. The writing is , or should be 80% of the grade. Then picture, font type, font color, font size, writing structure and grammer, and matting make up the other twenty percent. Karen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Comment from Barry Penfold
This is getting pretty exciting. Yes, cameras are wonderful in detecting criminals. Detective Brady is pretty smart I think. Will he get there.? Thanks for sharing. I will go to the next instalment.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This is getting pretty exciting. Yes, cameras are wonderful in detecting criminals. Detective Brady is pretty smart I think. Will he get there.? Thanks for sharing. I will go to the next instalment.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you Barry for a wonderful review
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another part of the saga. well done narrative, in a blank verse format. i asked earlier if this was based on a true case or not. if so, would be nice to see author's notes about the original case
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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another part of the saga. well done narrative, in a blank verse format. i asked earlier if this was based on a true case or not. if so, would be nice to see author's notes about the original case
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Jake for a great review
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Getting closer, now we wait for the results and take another step toward the shoe clue. I like this mystery poem, not many here on the site can do this. Keep it going.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Getting closer, now we wait for the results and take another step toward the shoe clue. I like this mystery poem, not many here on the site can do this. Keep it going.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Charles for a wonderful review.
Comment from Michele Harber
You really could write a crime series for television. Your knowledge of evidence and how it's dealt with seems well researched and very logical. If I ever become a victim of crime, I think I might call you before I call the police.
Your story is coming along at a very enjoyable pace, quick enough to not let the reader get bored, but slow enough to not reveal too much too soon. Again, the fact that you're doing this in excellent rhyme and meter is amazing!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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You really could write a crime series for television. Your knowledge of evidence and how it's dealt with seems well researched and very logical. If I ever become a victim of crime, I think I might call you before I call the police.
Your story is coming along at a very enjoyable pace, quick enough to not let the reader get bored, but slow enough to not reveal too much too soon. Again, the fact that you're doing this in excellent rhyme and meter is amazing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the compliments and for this wonderful review.
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You're welcome. You know I call 'em as I see 'em, so the compliments were genuinely deserved!
Comment from kahpot
I love the way your story/poem gives us all the information we need to know about the progress of the case, and how things back at this time would have taken so much longer than now, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I love the way your story/poem gives us all the information we need to know about the progress of the case, and how things back at this time would have taken so much longer than now, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful review
