BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Nocturnal Beasts"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Another great poem for the Book of Renga. I was in the woods at night only three nights that I spent in bivouac when I was in the Army roughing it. We were more afraid of creepy crawly things than we were of preying animals. About 3 am every morning a pack of wolves (a platoon of male soldiers) could be heard running a few yards away! lol.
I like your colorful graphics and poetry words.
Great entry Gypsy,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Gypsy,
Another great poem for the Book of Renga. I was in the woods at night only three nights that I spent in bivouac when I was in the Army roughing it. We were more afraid of creepy crawly things than we were of preying animals. About 3 am every morning a pack of wolves (a platoon of male soldiers) could be heard running a few yards away! lol.
I like your colorful graphics and poetry words.
Great entry Gypsy,
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
I loved this little piece you've crafted well, my friend. This is right up my alley, of course. I've been out for a bit; kidney stones ROCKing my world, lol. See what I did there? I had to have a procedure done that kept me away for a little bit. I hope to get back into the swing of it soon.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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I loved this little piece you've crafted well, my friend. This is right up my alley, of course. I've been out for a bit; kidney stones ROCKing my world, lol. See what I did there? I had to have a procedure done that kept me away for a little bit. I hope to get back into the swing of it soon.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Truly atmospheric and beautifully worded! Love the Romeo and Juliet use of "ill-starred" which fits perfectly here. A haunting theme and a joy to read. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Truly atmospheric and beautifully worded! Love the Romeo and Juliet use of "ill-starred" which fits perfectly here. A haunting theme and a joy to read. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
from the title... i flashed to richard marx's 80s song of the same title lol
a great 3-line renga
cool imagery, pic, and colours
smooth flow through the lines
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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from the title... i flashed to richard marx's 80s song of the same title lol
a great 3-line renga
cool imagery, pic, and colours
smooth flow through the lines
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such wild imagery. For me you capture the wild energy of nocturnal creatures. I love the phrase "beasts run wild neath the full moon" -- it gives a untamed feeling. And the tension in the final line about the "ill-starred prey" builds a sense of looming danger. Great job.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Your poem has such wild imagery. For me you capture the wild energy of nocturnal creatures. I love the phrase "beasts run wild neath the full moon" -- it gives a untamed feeling. And the tension in the final line about the "ill-starred prey" builds a sense of looming danger. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, The Children of the Night, has the proper formatting and notes the movement of the denizens of darkness which prow and prey on what is there.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This haiku, The Children of the Night, has the proper formatting and notes the movement of the denizens of darkness which prow and prey on what is there.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Gypsy
