Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Cindra digs in"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Excellent deliberation and fine dialogue. You have the gift of gab woo that I didn't think you ever did l o l! Great work as always a little bit. Jealous of your style myself, but that's okay. I can deal. Your book seems to be gearing up quite a bit. And some loose ends are coming together.Let the heroin kick ass!
Consider publishing because I think it's it's worthy only one thing to do with that, of course!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Excellent deliberation and fine dialogue. You have the gift of gab woo that I didn't think you ever did l o l! Great work as always a little bit. Jealous of your style myself, but that's okay. I can deal. Your book seems to be gearing up quite a bit. And some loose ends are coming together.Let the heroin kick ass!
Consider publishing because I think it's it's worthy only one thing to do with that, of course!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your review. The story is getting close to an end....lets see....who dunnit?
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Eileen did it. She wrote the whole thing I seen it happen.
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Thank you for your review and stars! I appreciate all the feedback
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
really enjoyed your story! Your writing does a great job of building tension. I loved how Cindra's determination and patience (or lack of it!) really shine through. The way you describe her actions kept me hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next. Your characters feel real which makes everything even more exciting. Keep up the great work - I'm really looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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really enjoyed your story! Your writing does a great job of building tension. I loved how Cindra's determination and patience (or lack of it!) really shine through. The way you describe her actions kept me hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next. Your characters feel real which makes everything even more exciting. Keep up the great work - I'm really looking forward to more!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you Michael. I am close to the end. A year long endeavor into writing. I am already manifesting the next novel...maybe Cindras story needs to be told?
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence and structure your paragraph and your punctuation made for a very good story to listen to. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence and structure your paragraph and your punctuation made for a very good story to listen to. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you Patricia. The story is almost done...hang on for more!
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Thank you for your review and stars! I appreciate all the feedback
