Collection of Favorite Poems
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Comment from shelley kaye
aww... poor deer... this is why i will NEVER watch bambi!!
anyway, cool double haiku with great imagery and smooth flow and juxtaposition between the two
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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aww... poor deer... this is why i will NEVER watch bambi!!
anyway, cool double haiku with great imagery and smooth flow and juxtaposition between the two
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Bambi is a horribly sad movie for children to watch.... Dumbo too... and Pinocchio .... so many. They scared me and made me cry when I was little.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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so true!!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I'm sorrt if you disagree, but hunting turns my stomach; if you enjoy sneaking up on an unarmed animal, the only shooting done should be done with a camera
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I'm sorrt if you disagree, but hunting turns my stomach; if you enjoy sneaking up on an unarmed animal, the only shooting done should be done with a camera
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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True but it's just a poem, no deers were hurt.... lol
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
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Ha!
Comment from lyenochka
Is the "dripping blood" because the deer was wounded or eaten? It's true that in nature "life is fleeting" as one animal eats another. And the vegetarians have to be fleet of foot!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Is the "dripping blood" because the deer was wounded or eaten? It's true that in nature "life is fleeting" as one animal eats another. And the vegetarians have to be fleet of foot!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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The deer was wounded. I'm sorry I keep coming up with animal tragedies. LoL
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, I know you are busy.
Love,
Marival
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful yet sad, as I imagine the deer being hunted and caught, and the predator enjoying the spoils beneath the moonlight, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Beautiful yet sad, as I imagine the deer being hunted and caught, and the predator enjoying the spoils beneath the moonlight, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think neither animals nor man really know when they will die. It can intact be under any moon or sun. This is the feeling I got when I read thus Haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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I think neither animals nor man really know when they will die. It can intact be under any moon or sun. This is the feeling I got when I read thus Haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
From the romantic description of this beautiful creature enjoying the freedom of its life to the brutal fate that awaits.The contrast is particularly powerful and poignant. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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From the romantic description of this beautiful creature enjoying the freedom of its life to the brutal fate that awaits.The contrast is particularly powerful and poignant. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Indeed, life can be fleeting, and it can go on longer than normal, and it is all in God's hands, but He put a balance in nature, and only He knows the time and the hour of each one's demise, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Indeed, life can be fleeting, and it can go on longer than normal, and it is all in God's hands, but He put a balance in nature, and only He knows the time and the hour of each one's demise, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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