2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I have always been interested in zebras. It made me look up the difference between horses and zebras. Although very similar, they are different too. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I have always been interested in zebras. It made me look up the difference between horses and zebras. Although very similar, they are different too. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's cute! I like your X alliteration poem and the striped pajamas. Do they even make striped pajamas anymore? Zebras are such cool animals and each have unique striping.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's cute! I like your X alliteration poem and the striped pajamas. Do they even make striped pajamas anymore? Zebras are such cool animals and each have unique striping.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister. I hope you're having a great weekend.
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Marival ❤️
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Terrific z-letter alliterations for your text. Zeal was not a collective I am familiar with. My spouse did not know it either but remarked that is a good word to use in Scrabble.
So does the zebra have white stripes on a black coat, or vice versa ? LOL
Nice artwork used to pair with your poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Terrific z-letter alliterations for your text. Zeal was not a collective I am familiar with. My spouse did not know it either but remarked that is a good word to use in Scrabble.
So does the zebra have white stripes on a black coat, or vice versa ? LOL
Nice artwork used to pair with your poem.
Mark
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
omg... i read striped pajamas line... i immediately thought of the boy movie... LOL
also, i think it should be "striped pajamas" - you may want to check on that lol
anyway, other than that, a great zebra haiku written with zeal!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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omg... i read striped pajamas line... i immediately thought of the boy movie... LOL
also, i think it should be "striped pajamas" - you may want to check on that lol
anyway, other than that, a great zebra haiku written with zeal!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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"The Boy" is that about the doll boy? It was creepy. Smile 😃
Thank you very much 😊 I fixed it. Thanks!
Gypsy
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no. "the boy in the striped pajamas"
it's a traumatizing movie!
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Oh, I never saw it.i like but I hate disturbing ones
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I googled it. It was very sad too.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I didn't know about that collective noun for zebras. How lovely! And I think this must be the first time I've seen alliteration with the letter 'z.' And the stripe pajamas are the icing on the cake:)) Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I didn't know about that collective noun for zebras. How lovely! And I think this must be the first time I've seen alliteration with the letter 'z.' And the stripe pajamas are the icing on the cake:)) Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Zeal of Zebras, has the proper formatting and shows that show creatures have the will to run through their worlds in their knickers if need be.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This 5-7-5, The Zeal of Zebras, has the proper formatting and shows that show creatures have the will to run through their worlds in their knickers if need be.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
They are an amazing picture indeed. I know people who tried to tane them, but with no success. Some creature are meant to be free. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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They are an amazing picture indeed. I know people who tried to tane them, but with no success. Some creature are meant to be free. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ