Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautifully written and presented, I really like the image I get when reading
Tangerine Sunset" as the wheat say goodbye to a most important life source, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This is really beautiful. But I thought that I already said so yesterday, it's beautiful all the same. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. Today we are in Texas by our two sons, daughter and our son's wife.
RJ
RJ

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 22-Dec-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I was sure I'd reviewed this one because I remember enthusing about the colour, tangerine, and the personified wheat fields. Beautifully done! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Yes, the first time I made a mistake and it didn't go through the contest link.

Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Have a wonderful weekend ☺️

Gypsy 😊

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this again. I thought I reviewed this contest entry yesterday. Maybe my brain is playing tricks on me. It's possible. LOL. This is a very strong contest entry. The poem is perfect as is the presentation. Good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

The first time didn't go through the contest link so I had to re do it.

Thank you very much for your exceptional review.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Marival. It's a beautiful lune poem I absolutely love it. Your presentation is beautiful as well. Just one thing: normally a lune poem is written like this:
Tangerine Sunset
Over farms
Wheat fields wave goodbye.

The words are forming a half moon. Hence it's a lune poem. Good luck, Besitos, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Gracias, guapa,

I fixed it. Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.

Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

now it's in the contest!!
a great tangerine lune
with nice imagery of wheat fields
waving goodbye in an autumn breeze
smooth flow throughout. . .
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :-)

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Yes, I had to re do it though the contest link.

Thank you very much for your exceptional review.

Gypsy 😊