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Comment from Pam (respa)
Thanks for sharing the notes and story, Charles. Hope you are better soon. You did a good job describing giving an overview of Charlie and how he and Hazel plan to marry. It sounds like they would be a good match. I guess there was a minor problem with the change from wildflowers to roses, but it was easily taken care of.
It is good that people can have a positive attitude, like the Pastor saying that green grass is growing, replacing what had been burned by the wild fire, and that was a good thing.
You end the story well, but unfortunately the towns people might be in for some unwonted visitors. Take care and be well soon.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thanks for sharing the notes and story, Charles. Hope you are better soon. You did a good job describing giving an overview of Charlie and how he and Hazel plan to marry. It sounds like they would be a good match. I guess there was a minor problem with the change from wildflowers to roses, but it was easily taken care of.
It is good that people can have a positive attitude, like the Pastor saying that green grass is growing, replacing what had been burned by the wild fire, and that was a good thing.
You end the story well, but unfortunately the towns people might be in for some unwonted visitors. Take care and be well soon.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Pam, Always a pleasure reading your response.
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You are very welcome, Charles.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm praying for your health. I enjoyed reading. I always like your stories. They're very good.
It was from my friend Sheriff Clark in an adjoining county. (friend,)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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I'm praying for your health. I enjoyed reading. I always like your stories. They're very good.
It was from my friend Sheriff Clark in an adjoining county. (friend,)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Glad you found favor. Thanks, Barb, yes I am in need of those prayers.
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There are many coming your way.
Comment from Ric Myworld
As Roosevelt often said: "speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far." So, I'm sure if you're packing a shotgun with a mean look on your face, you might go even farther. But faith will take you even farther than either. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you, and I hope 2025 is your Best New Year Ever!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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As Roosevelt often said: "speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far." So, I'm sure if you're packing a shotgun with a mean look on your face, you might go even farther. But faith will take you even farther than either. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you, and I hope 2025 is your Best New Year Ever!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank, Ric. Have a great 2025
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Charles, as you know, I love this story. You make the era come alive in a wonderful way. It is as if I'm there. I sure hope you're well, and I will be looking out for your next chapter in the new year. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Oh, Charles, as you know, I love this story. You make the era come alive in a wonderful way. It is as if I'm there. I sure hope you're well, and I will be looking out for your next chapter in the new year. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you Ulla. I think of you and you story The Bakers quiet often. Have a great 2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Charles,
This is a wonderful story. I am coming into the middle of it, but it is easy enough to pick up. This story is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Charles,
This is a wonderful story. I am coming into the middle of it, but it is easy enough to pick up. This story is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Glad you found favor. May our Lord bless you with a great 2025.
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Thank you. This year has been tough and I'm ready to be done with it. May you be Blessed in 2025.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am out of sixes, but you know I would have given you one for this well written piece, Chuck. You really put us into the town, we have gotten to know the people so well now. I'm hoping no harm will come to Ralph, Charlie or the town folk when and if those rough looking men come to town. That wouldn't finish my year off well!!! Well done, my dear friend. Love you lots. Have a great 2025! Sandy xxxx
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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I am out of sixes, but you know I would have given you one for this well written piece, Chuck. You really put us into the town, we have gotten to know the people so well now. I'm hoping no harm will come to Ralph, Charlie or the town folk when and if those rough looking men come to town. That wouldn't finish my year off well!!! Well done, my dear friend. Love you lots. Have a great 2025! Sandy xxxx
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Glad you found favor. May our Lord bless you with a great 2025.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well done, and I hope the therapy is going well. Nice piece. Building the tension nicely. Will wait for the next instalment in the New Year. Thanks for sharing.
Take care.
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Well done, and I hope the therapy is going well. Nice piece. Building the tension nicely. Will wait for the next instalment in the New Year. Thanks for sharing.
Take care.
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Glad you found favor, Berry. May our Lord bless you with a great 2025.
