2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "The Stars Tremble".
7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I could feel the sensual memories of love at the beginning of this poem. Then it switched to the loneness of the lost love. Wonderful job of showing opposite emotions in one poem. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I could feel the sensual memories of love at the beginning of this poem. Then it switched to the loneness of the lost love. Wonderful job of showing opposite emotions in one poem. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....really captures the heartbreak and longing to return to the days of relationship's better days of sleeping double in a single sleeping bag!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....really captures the heartbreak and longing to return to the days of relationship's better days of sleeping double in a single sleeping bag!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That is so sad that the beloved one is gone and the narrator only has th memories of the intense closeness. I liked your personification of the wind and "dripping loneliness and loss".
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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That is so sad that the beloved one is gone and the narrator only has th memories of the intense closeness. I liked your personification of the wind and "dripping loneliness and loss".
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from kahpot
"you are gone
and the night is silent
as the stars tremble
in the distance" The stars do tremble when the heart is broken and the eyes are blurred with tears, the things we loved to do together are the hardest to do alone, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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"you are gone
and the night is silent
as the stars tremble
in the distance" The stars do tremble when the heart is broken and the eyes are blurred with tears, the things we loved to do together are the hardest to do alone, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, kym. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from l.raven
Hi Marival, sounds like my husband and I...
he passed to early...54...I miss the closeness
we had when we were together...
memories can bring back moments remembered...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and so love your picture...
you can almost feel the warmth...very nicely written...love you...
Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Marival, sounds like my husband and I...
he passed to early...54...I miss the closeness
we had when we were together...
memories can bring back moments remembered...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and so love your picture...
you can almost feel the warmth...very nicely written...love you...
Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I'm sorry for your loss. It's hard to have a happy marriage.
Thank you very much 😊
Marival xoxo
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yes it is my sweet friend...
and Thank You...your sooo welcome...
love ya...xxoo
Comment from shelley kaye
there is so much imagery i love in this!
the silent night with trembling stars
winds spinning and dancing
the waves playing with the sand
and poems falling like dew over the grass
excellent wording with much emotion and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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there is so much imagery i love in this!
the silent night with trembling stars
winds spinning and dancing
the waves playing with the sand
and poems falling like dew over the grass
excellent wording with much emotion and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
This is something that can only be written by someone that has experienced tragedy and seperation in their lives, it is such an inspiring post dear Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This is something that can only be written by someone that has experienced tragedy and seperation in their lives, it is such an inspiring post dear Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome