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What Matters These Days

A 20-syllable poem about December

3 total reviews 
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Laurie,
I enjoy the solitude of my time alone, but we have two of our adult children in the same town, plus one grandchild and four greats, so the solitude is usually short lived. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    You are so kind, Tom. Thank you!
Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your poem captures a beautiful simplicity and raw emotion. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a picture of quiet moments and introspection. The juxtaposition of elements like the tree and lights with being alone creates a poignant and reflective mood




 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Such a kind and beautifully written review, Peter. Thank you.
reply by Peter Jarvis on 18-Dec-2024
    You're very welcome! I'm glad you appreciated the response.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Laurie,

This is a lovely 20 syllable poem. It has the Christmas cheer in it as well as
some alone time with you hubby. The words speaks volumes to the reader who can appreciate them.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much, Cecilia.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 18-Dec-2024
    You're welcome