BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Feel the Kiss"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
4 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, the warmth of love will get us through the cold season, until the sun shines again in the next, a wonderful addition to the Renga book, very well presented****kahpot
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Excellent, yes, the warmth of love will get us through the cold season, until the sun shines again in the next, a wonderful addition to the Renga book, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Wonderful winter 5-7-5 stanza. Great link to previous chapter and winter season.
Good syllables count and connection. The presentation is lovely.
We will move on to spring slowly. Making the switch is a delicate thing. Maybe we can coordinate a complete 5-7-5 and 7/7 together to steer the change. Think about it.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, June,
Wonderful winter 5-7-5 stanza. Great link to previous chapter and winter season.
Good syllables count and connection. The presentation is lovely.
We will move on to spring slowly. Making the switch is a delicate thing. Maybe we can coordinate a complete 5-7-5 and 7/7 together to steer the change. Think about it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Keep sensing the "kiss of spring" and we'll all welcome spring flowers soon! Meanwhile we'll have to sleep through the cold winter months! Nice Renga 7-7!
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Keep sensing the "kiss of spring" and we'll all welcome spring flowers soon! Meanwhile we'll have to sleep through the cold winter months! Nice Renga 7-7!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are so optimistic June and I love your hope in this one as you yearn for spring and I feel it too. A fine poem, full of positivity and I hope you keep smiling during the winter season, love Dolly x x x
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You are so optimistic June and I love your hope in this one as you yearn for spring and I feel it too. A fine poem, full of positivity and I hope you keep smiling during the winter season, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
