Collection of Favorite Poems
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12 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
I love the structure of this Senryu series, painting a vivid picture of the sunset as it paints the sky in beautiful and powerful shades.
The way you link and liken this to that of a beautiful woman and tie that all into Corinthians declaration of the body as a temple to the Glory of God.
Thank you for sharing Gypsy
Tim
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I love the structure of this Senryu series, painting a vivid picture of the sunset as it paints the sky in beautiful and powerful shades.
The way you link and liken this to that of a beautiful woman and tie that all into Corinthians declaration of the body as a temple to the Glory of God.
Thank you for sharing Gypsy
Tim
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is all at once spiritual and romantic. My favorite line is and a wild uproar erupts inside my wistful heart. That is the spirit in action as you so deftly write in this Senryu.
I love the descriptions of your internal temple of God and how it is He who resides within you. This sounds like Buddism in the making and I confess I know very little about that religion other than the way it resides in the heart and spirit of the individual.
I admire your attention to detail in this presentation.
Well written and worthy of reading by the masses.
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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This is all at once spiritual and romantic. My favorite line is and a wild uproar erupts inside my wistful heart. That is the spirit in action as you so deftly write in this Senryu.
I love the descriptions of your internal temple of God and how it is He who resides within you. This sounds like Buddism in the making and I confess I know very little about that religion other than the way it resides in the heart and spirit of the individual.
I admire your attention to detail in this presentation.
Well written and worthy of reading by the masses.
Jesse
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Jesse,
This poem can be about Buddha or Jesus Christ. I was thinking about Jesus Christ. Since he was a man before he became a god, some believe he had a wife and children. I use my imagination and what it would be like to love a man who was extremely good and wise. I like the new testament and the Songs of Salomon (bible) about love. And the book of Longings, a fictional book about a woman poet and Jesus, it's a love story and they get married.
Gypsy hugs
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You have a great imagination, my friend. I love reading your work.
Thanks for the Gypsy Hugs.
Jesse
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is very sensual and emotional. I enjoyed reading. Your descriptions are perfect, 'your sand color skin tastes like cinnamon sugar
and smells like myrrh'. Just an example, there are others. The presentation is beautiful.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This poem is very sensual and emotional. I enjoyed reading. Your descriptions are perfect, 'your sand color skin tastes like cinnamon sugar
and smells like myrrh'. Just an example, there are others. The presentation is beautiful.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 🙂
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed you senryu stanza. You know all about Japanese poetry and you are artist with your poetry as illustrating it beautifully. Sand color skin that tastes like cinnamon sugar and smell like myrrh is very descriptive using using smell, taste and sight.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed you senryu stanza. You know all about Japanese poetry and you are artist with your poetry as illustrating it beautifully. Sand color skin that tastes like cinnamon sugar and smell like myrrh is very descriptive using using smell, taste and sight.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed you senryu stanza. You know all about Japanese poetry and you are artist with your poetry as illustrating it beautifully. Sand color skin that tastes like cinnamon sugar and smell like myrrh is very descriptive using using smell, taste and sight.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed you senryu stanza. You know all about Japanese poetry and you are artist with your poetry as illustrating it beautifully. Sand color skin that tastes like cinnamon sugar and smell like myrrh is very descriptive using using smell, taste and sight.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
This is a marvellous post Gypsy, a lot of people love cinnamon sugar. it's a great additive to one's coffee, as always Gypsy, you have a fantastic presentation and beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This is a marvellous post Gypsy, a lot of people love cinnamon sugar. it's a great additive to one's coffee, as always Gypsy, you have a fantastic presentation and beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Welcome
Comment from kahpot
So sensual and erotic, it makes me think of waiting for a lover to return, as my emotions are reflected in the changing sky, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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So sensual and erotic, it makes me think of waiting for a lover to return, as my emotions are reflected in the changing sky, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a fantasy where I could see, taste and smell the subject. Beautiful imagery, and a darkly romantic flavor to this. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This was such a fantasy where I could see, taste and smell the subject. Beautiful imagery, and a darkly romantic flavor to this. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I'm happy that you like it.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
romantic senryu suite...
excellent imagery...
and smooth flow of words...
didn't notice any spag or typos.....
thank you for for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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romantic senryu suite...
excellent imagery...
and smooth flow of words...
didn't notice any spag or typos.....
thank you for for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! The imagery your words deliver is phenomenal. I can see the fire, and hear the wolves as piercing eyes erupts in my spirit. I am not a poet, but I feel your compelling words. You've included taste and smell and provided a full sensory experience of heat and fire. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Wow! The imagery your words deliver is phenomenal. I can see the fire, and hear the wolves as piercing eyes erupts in my spirit. I am not a poet, but I feel your compelling words. You've included taste and smell and provided a full sensory experience of heat and fire. Beautiful.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent and helpful review. I appreciate your kind words.
Gypsy hugs
