Grumpy Old Men
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Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, Glen and Rick had TWO movies made about them, that's pretty incredible. It's really cool that he Hollywood even came to where they live to shoot their life story. And just think sis, they chose Ann-Margret to play you, wow.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Well, Glen and Rick had TWO movies made about them, that's pretty incredible. It's really cool that he Hollywood even came to where they live to shoot their life story. And just think sis, they chose Ann-Margret to play you, wow.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much, Dan, for the kindest and such a special review for my Grumpy old Men movies. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it! Also for the beautiful six stars, big brother. Sorry, but you get the title now!! Haha.
Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
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Well, Debi, I think I'm gonna go to bed in a few minutes and it's only 9:15 PM but my mother-in-law, Kathy and I are leaving early tomorrow morning and I am the designated driver. We are leaving our home just outside of Atlanta and driving to about 50 miles north of Grand Rapids Michigan. Those crazy ladies want me to drive straight through. They both said that they would help drive if I ask for it. What I think is I have about 15 hours to drive tomorrow. The truth is I don't know how many hours I'm just spit balling it. Merry Christmas and God bless you and your family.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed your poem and of not only a entertaining me movie, but only these two fine actors truly made this a classic.
Right now I am a grumpy wife. Husband started at 3:30 AM this morning for me to get up.I hung in there until 5:30..
This did actually improve myood
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your poem and of not only a entertaining me movie, but only these two fine actors truly made this a classic.
Right now I am a grumpy wife. Husband started at 3:30 AM this morning for me to get up.I hung in there until 5:30..
This did actually improve myood
Mary
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Mary, forgive me that this is so late. I don't forget, but I often just keep plucking away until I get them all. I was so sure I answered you on this one because I was laughing to myself about men!!!!!! Thanks so much for a little chuckle back. Love, Debi. Merry Christmas, my sweet friend.
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Mary, forgive me that this is so late. I don't forget, but I often just keep plucking away until I get them all. I was so sure I answered you on this one because I was laughing to myself about men!!!!!! Thanks so much for a little chuckle back. Love, Debi. Merry Christmas, my sweet friend.
Comment from TPAC
Lovely composed poetry, in my given opinion, finding an abundance of captivating inputs by you: capturing a wonderful imagination with wit. Just my viewpoint on this particular read. Swèet.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Lovely composed poetry, in my given opinion, finding an abundance of captivating inputs by you: capturing a wonderful imagination with wit. Just my viewpoint on this particular read. Swèet.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi TPAC, and sorry this is so late but I continue to pluck away until I get them. So thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one. I am so glad that you liked it cause it was a little different.. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from ESOSTINE
A wonderfully written piece of poetry laced with humour. I am not familiar with this movie, though not a fan. Trying hard to learn sitting down for hours to watch movies as advised by my Dr. Well done, dear Debi.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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A wonderfully written piece of poetry laced with humour. I am not familiar with this movie, though not a fan. Trying hard to learn sitting down for hours to watch movies as advised by my Dr. Well done, dear Debi.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi Esostine, and sorry this is so late but I continue to pluck away until I get them. So thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one. I am so glad that you liked it cause it was a little different.. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I remember those two movies, made in the days before politically correct speech ruled our lives. Your husband and his friend Rick, sound like good old mates who enjoy a fish, and a chat and enjoy the challenge of getting the biggest fish. Merry Christmas, Debi
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I remember those two movies, made in the days before politically correct speech ruled our lives. Your husband and his friend Rick, sound like good old mates who enjoy a fish, and a chat and enjoy the challenge of getting the biggest fish. Merry Christmas, Debi
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Valda, and thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one.
Maybe cause he goes to the lake everyday to see if the ice is safe enough yet. LOL, he is such a big kid that just can't wait. But then last year it was too warm so he is going thru withdrawal something fierce. Haha. Anyway, it was a fun one to do.
I appreciate you having a little laugh with me with this one. Thanks so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debi,
It sounds like Glen and Rick could make their very own movie. What would it be called?
"Two More Grumpy Old Men"
or
"Grumpy Grampies"
or
"Back To Back at the Fishing Shack"
Terrific poem! You should have saved it for a Share A Story in a Poem contest!
I think there's no better reason to retire than to go fishing.
Here in southern New Brunswick, once the Saint John River ice is thick enough, fishing shack villages pop up. The largest is in Public Landing where there's still an old wharf. Some have woodstoves. Some even have windows. Most have cold beer. And the fish they catch... smelt! The daily limit is 60 smelt. Much of the time, the only noises you'll hear are the snap of beer cans being opened, chattering teeth, and loud cracks of the river ice.
My favorite lines,
"The one that gets the biggest fish, won't have to buy the beer."
I have just one suggestion for you, and it's in the very first line...
"Two Minnesota guys who love to fish all winter long"
( I think you should use "men" instead of "guys", catching that bit of great alliteration,
Two Minnesota men who love to fish all winter long)
In other spots of your poem where you refer to "grumpy old men", use: grumpy old guys, grumpy old boys, or grumpy old farts.
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi,
It sounds like Glen and Rick could make their very own movie. What would it be called?
"Two More Grumpy Old Men"
or
"Grumpy Grampies"
or
"Back To Back at the Fishing Shack"
Terrific poem! You should have saved it for a Share A Story in a Poem contest!
I think there's no better reason to retire than to go fishing.
Here in southern New Brunswick, once the Saint John River ice is thick enough, fishing shack villages pop up. The largest is in Public Landing where there's still an old wharf. Some have woodstoves. Some even have windows. Most have cold beer. And the fish they catch... smelt! The daily limit is 60 smelt. Much of the time, the only noises you'll hear are the snap of beer cans being opened, chattering teeth, and loud cracks of the river ice.
My favorite lines,
"The one that gets the biggest fish, won't have to buy the beer."
I have just one suggestion for you, and it's in the very first line...
"Two Minnesota guys who love to fish all winter long"
( I think you should use "men" instead of "guys", catching that bit of great alliteration,
Two Minnesota men who love to fish all winter long)
In other spots of your poem where you refer to "grumpy old men", use: grumpy old guys, grumpy old boys, or grumpy old farts.
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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'Gotcha, Sweetie, and I will make that change when I get done writing this. Hey, if anyone would know, it would be another man. Haha! Kinda silly, but last year was no fishing cause of the warm weather, so this year it will soon be cold enough for them. Yay!
Thanks for all your awesome comments and Glen doesn't catch Smelt but he goes to smelt fries. They used to be stag, but like women will allow that anymore. I have no problem with it but some women just can't let men have their own thing.
Thanks again, my dear dear friend and I think I will try to find a spot for that grumpy old farts or grumpy grampies. I love it!!
Love, Debi
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Hey Kimbob, I really made some changes. I took your advice but I made a big change about me being Ann Margaret towards the end. Tell me what you think. Haha.
Comment from bob cullen
I have just one comment. In the interest of Grumpy Old Men, I believe it's only fair in these days of 'alleged' equality', someone should respond on behalf of the masculine gender in coming up with a poem titled WOW, 'Whinin' ol' Women.'
Loved your poem. And here is my reply.
She wakes up ev'ry mornin', demandin' a cup of tea in bed.
When I suggest an alternative, she smacks me in the head.
"That's all you ever think of." Kicks me in the groin instead.
"An' don't forget the babies, make sure those kids are fed."
Gotta drop the kids at school, then hang the washin' on the line
If I could I'd quit this job, go ahead an' in an outburst just resign.
But I'll fess up, I will not lie, some days I kinda like her still
'Specially when she comes an' cuddles up, I still get quite a thrill.
When she starts squawking in the pen, I fear I've done my dash
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I have just one comment. In the interest of Grumpy Old Men, I believe it's only fair in these days of 'alleged' equality', someone should respond on behalf of the masculine gender in coming up with a poem titled WOW, 'Whinin' ol' Women.'
Loved your poem. And here is my reply.
She wakes up ev'ry mornin', demandin' a cup of tea in bed.
When I suggest an alternative, she smacks me in the head.
"That's all you ever think of." Kicks me in the groin instead.
"An' don't forget the babies, make sure those kids are fed."
Gotta drop the kids at school, then hang the washin' on the line
If I could I'd quit this job, go ahead an' in an outburst just resign.
But I'll fess up, I will not lie, some days I kinda like her still
'Specially when she comes an' cuddles up, I still get quite a thrill.
When she starts squawking in the pen, I fear I've done my dash
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hahahaha, Bob, that was so funny!! You crack me up!! I don't think my hubby would still love me but then who knows? LOL.
So, thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one.
Maybe cause he goes to the lake everyday to see if the ice is safe enough yet. LOL, he is such a big kid that just can't wait. But then last year it was too warm so he is going thru withdrawal something fierce. Haha. Anyway, it was a fun one to do.
I appreciate you having a little laugh with me with this one. Thanks so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, Debi. You did a really good job with it. Effective imagery and rhyme tell a good story. A good introduction, followed by their "big wish" when they fish, the goal being to catch the biggest one. I like your lines about the role each one could very easily play.
A very good concluding verse about festival in your area, and the movies being made there.
A very good closing line, as well. Very well done. An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, Debi. You did a really good job with it. Effective imagery and rhyme tell a good story. A good introduction, followed by their "big wish" when they fish, the goal being to catch the biggest one. I like your lines about the role each one could very easily play.
A very good concluding verse about festival in your area, and the movies being made there.
A very good closing line, as well. Very well done. An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Pam, and thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one. I am so glad that you liked it cause it was a little different.
Maybe cause he goes to the lake everyday to see if the ice is safe enough yet. LOL, he is such a big kid that just can't wait. But then last year it was too warm so he is going thru withdrawal something fierce. Haha. Anyway, it was a fun one to do.
I appreciate you having a little laugh with me with this one. Thanks so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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You are very welcome for the review, Debi, and thanks for sharing in your reply. I think sometimes ideas and poems just pop into our heads. It's always good when it's fun to write, too!
Have a great day and upcoming weekend.
Comment from LateBloomer
Who doesn't love Lemmon and Matthau?! They are the funniest and have always made a great team. As far as your MN men, let them go fishing as much as they want to, and let them each think that they caught the biggest fish. They will both have to buy the beer--double the beer, double the delight.
A fun poem that made me smile. Good rhyming. I love the photo of Moron and Putz. Big-teeth smile. Xo. M
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Who doesn't love Lemmon and Matthau?! They are the funniest and have always made a great team. As far as your MN men, let them go fishing as much as they want to, and let them each think that they caught the biggest fish. They will both have to buy the beer--double the beer, double the delight.
A fun poem that made me smile. Good rhyming. I love the photo of Moron and Putz. Big-teeth smile. Xo. M
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Sis, and thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one. This is a little fiction too though.
Maybe cause he goes to the lake everyday to see if the ice is safe enough yet. LOL, he is such a big kid that just can't wait. But then last year it was too warm so he is going thru withdrawal something fierce. Haha. Anyway, it was a fun one to do.
I appreciate you having a little laugh with me with this one. Thanks so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well then, Debi,
I have never been ice fishing but I have seen Grumpy Old Men, I didn't know there was a second one though so I will have to get around to watching it sometime.
Great poem and some time, I shall have to try ice fishing ;-)
Tim x
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Well then, Debi,
I have never been ice fishing but I have seen Grumpy Old Men, I didn't know there was a second one though so I will have to get around to watching it sometime.
Great poem and some time, I shall have to try ice fishing ;-)
Tim x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Tim, and thanks so much for the awesome review and for the kind comments. I have no clue what made me do this one.
Maybe cause he goes to the lake everyday to see if the ice is safe enough yet. LOL, he is such a big kid that just can't wait. But then last year it was too warm so he is going thru withdrawal something fierce. Haha. Anyway, it was a fun one to do.
The name of the second one is Grumpier Old Men.
I appreciate you having a little laugh with me with this one. Thanks so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi