Parting Blessing
His son was now flesh . . .7 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
Loved the way, you have depicted so much in three lines. The last line is so telling-- the farewell kiss of a Father who knew his son was going to be crucified. Well written, Yvette.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Loved the way, you have depicted so much in three lines. The last line is so telling-- the farewell kiss of a Father who knew his son was going to be crucified. Well written, Yvette.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for your review on this one -- it was surprising to read that the message of the final line was a complete mystery to some, but it is what it is! ;) :) Take care out there and have a Wonderful Wednesday!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture is sweet and the poetry is well done. Another overcast day here. My back and legs are screaming. They won't let me write a new story. Rude things. I am bringing Star Trek DS9 this week. There are at least 5 more series after this one. Love to you and yours. Karen
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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The picture is sweet and the poetry is well done. Another overcast day here. My back and legs are screaming. They won't let me write a new story. Rude things. I am bringing Star Trek DS9 this week. There are at least 5 more series after this one. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review. I do hope your circumstances improve... Merry Christmas!
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I refuse to listen to them, Today I am making soup. I may have to do it a bit at a time, but there is only me waiting for it LOL :-)
Comment from royowen
There are so many human tragedies about life, but surely on of the worst is a child being deserted at birth, or shortly after, the greater gift one can have is a child to nurture and love. Good luck, Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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There are so many human tragedies about life, but surely on of the worst is a child being deserted at birth, or shortly after, the greater gift one can have is a child to nurture and love. Good luck, Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Son of God... to flesh. Father God kisses his son good bye... Thank you for your review.
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welcomer
Comment from Rick Gardner
Strong words, had deep, lasting feelings of when I first saw my babies, many years ago, now grandchildren, A gift given to us by our maker. Then the need to protect them, feed them. Cannot be taken lightly. Unsure of how to interpret the last line though.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Strong words, had deep, lasting feelings of when I first saw my babies, many years ago, now grandchildren, A gift given to us by our maker. Then the need to protect them, feed them. Cannot be taken lightly. Unsure of how to interpret the last line though.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Son of God... to flesh. Father God kisses his son good bye... Thank you for your review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
This poem is very unique, Mystery Poet. It takes a whole new slant on the Christmas story. It shows the Father's love for all of us, and His feelings when He sent His Son to earth. It's brilliant and Poignant. Thanks for sharing, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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This poem is very unique, Mystery Poet. It takes a whole new slant on the Christmas story. It shows the Father's love for all of us, and His feelings when He sent His Son to earth. It's brilliant and Poignant. Thanks for sharing, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for understanding and for your review... the meaning of this one has been lost on most...
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But, the message was the biggest part, besides the adorable baby picture!!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is lovely 5-7-5 Christmas poem. You nailed it with the picture of the baby in the manger. It compliments this poem nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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This is lovely 5-7-5 Christmas poem. You nailed it with the picture of the baby in the manger. It compliments this poem nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so full of emotion! The details about the newborn's innocence and the father's farewell adds a bittersweet feeling. This is such a touching and powerful piece!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Your poem is so full of emotion! The details about the newborn's innocence and the father's farewell adds a bittersweet feeling. This is such a touching and powerful piece!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Many thanks, Michael, for such a wonderful review!