Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness! Love the tie in between the hearth and the gathering space and the scents of the kitchen wafting over it all - well done! Would suggest, perhaps, centering your text and maybe enlarging it a bit... :-) :-) But don't change a word! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is such a heartwarming scene! I could almost smell the apple pie! I could feel the warmth of the fire. I could hear the hymns filling the air. It's a perfect way of showing Christmas in just a few lines. What a lovely way to celebrate the spirit of Christmas!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024