Not Another One
I often hear people have new aches and pains as they age3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Isn't it terrible to wake up like that and all you had been doing was just sleeping! My husband and I call it "sleeping injuries." A very relatable situation in your brief poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Isn't it terrible to wake up like that and all you had been doing was just sleeping! My husband and I call it "sleeping injuries." A very relatable situation in your brief poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Yes! That would be annoying waking up with a new ache or pain! I'm thankful it's only happened a few times. Thank you for your review:)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
You've captured the reality of aging so clearly. The way you wrote it makes it hit even harder. I felt the weight of those aches along with you. Keep writing - this style really works!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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You've captured the reality of aging so clearly. The way you wrote it makes it hit even harder. I felt the weight of those aches along with you. Keep writing - this style really works!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Fortunately, right now I don't experience that but I work with a lot of people that do and so I thought I would give this a try.
Comment from Tim Margetts
I hear you my unknown friend.
The joy of ageing isn't exactly a joy.
Now, as per the rules of Fanstory, I have to write 20 times more words in review than you had to write in your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Tim
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I hear you my unknown friend.
The joy of ageing isn't exactly a joy.
Now, as per the rules of Fanstory, I have to write 20 times more words in review than you had to write in your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Tim
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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That's funny, yes the challenge sometimes is coming up with 150 characters when you hit save. Good job on your review! And thank you for the review as well. Happy Saturday.