BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Rich Harvest"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
14 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My Grandma was always so very grateful for everything and thanked the Lord for every meal she ate. I remember her with such fondness. She never expected anything from life and everything that came her way she accepted with thanks. I enjoyed your uplifting words Brenda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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My Grandma was always so very grateful for everything and thanked the Lord for every meal she ate. I remember her with such fondness. She never expected anything from life and everything that came her way she accepted with thanks. I enjoyed your uplifting words Brenda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you Dolly for your beautiful words.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A simple, sweet poem about the bounty of blessings we receive from God in our harvests. I love the artwork and the colors in it. Perfect for your presentation.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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A simple, sweet poem about the bounty of blessings we receive from God in our harvests. I love the artwork and the colors in it. Perfect for your presentation.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your very nice words. I thought this book was a good idea.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so vivid and tactile, I could virtually reach out and touch the little fellow! He complements your renga poem well, reflecting the brilliant and plentiful gifts for which we offer thanks to God. Well done, Brenda. Take care. Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This is so vivid and tactile, I could virtually reach out and touch the little fellow! He complements your renga poem well, reflecting the brilliant and plentiful gifts for which we offer thanks to God. Well done, Brenda. Take care. Debbie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you Debbie for your great review. Ivthink this book was such a great idea.
Comment from karenina
Yes! Looking for these little Renga entries for the book has been a lot of fun!
I love your image here...
This collaboration was a great idea by Gypsy!
I'll have to watch out for how the next person finishes yours with two lines, 7/7...
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Yes! Looking for these little Renga entries for the book has been a lot of fun!
I love your image here...
This collaboration was a great idea by Gypsy!
I'll have to watch out for how the next person finishes yours with two lines, 7/7...
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this great review. I thought it was a great idea too.
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Smile...
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words that are true. Well presented and illustrated poem.
Thanks for sharing this with me. May you have a great day. God blessings to you and your family.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Beautiful words that are true. Well presented and illustrated poem.
Thanks for sharing this with me. May you have a great day. God blessings to you and your family.
RJ
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, R.J. I appreciate your very nice review. I hope you have a great day too.
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective nature imagery describes
how God "provides sunlight"
as well as a good harvest.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective nature imagery describes
how God "provides sunlight"
as well as a good harvest.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the very nice review. I greatly appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
He does indeed provide us with the sunshine in the day, and certainly the rain that comes in season, both the material kind and the spiritual, this is beautifully written, well done Brenda, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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He does indeed provide us with the sunshine in the day, and certainly the rain that comes in season, both the material kind and the spiritual, this is beautifully written, well done Brenda, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Hi Roy, thank you so.much for the great review.
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Sunlight is critical for a "plentiful harvest" and all glory goes to God our Creator! I enjoyed your poem. I don't know what was before but I guess this follows the last one.
Your first line has six syllables so you might want to drop the "our".
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Sunlight is critical for a "plentiful harvest" and all glory goes to God our Creator! I enjoyed your poem. I don't know what was before but I guess this follows the last one.
Your first line has six syllables so you might want to drop the "our".
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great revuew.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hi Brenda, I left you a PM a couple hours ago as soon as I got your message that you did this poem. But you never checked your messages. I hate telling these things in a review but I fear you won't receive my message otherwise.
You have six syllables in the first line and you are only supposed to have five.
You best change it before too many people see it.
However, very nice message and great poem. You just need to change that one word. How about our God provides? Let me know if you get this message.
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Hi Brenda, I left you a PM a couple hours ago as soon as I got your message that you did this poem. But you never checked your messages. I hate telling these things in a review but I fear you won't receive my message otherwise.
You have six syllables in the first line and you are only supposed to have five.
You best change it before too many people see it.
However, very nice message and great poem. You just need to change that one word. How about our God provides? Let me know if you get this message.
Love, Debi
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi. Thank you for this great review. I fixed the mistake.
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You are so welcome and great job
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem gives the reason for the season. Today the holidays, especially Christmas is way too commercialised, Jesus is lost in the gaudy bright lights and hype.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Your poem gives the reason for the season. Today the holidays, especially Christmas is way too commercialised, Jesus is lost in the gaudy bright lights and hype.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great review.