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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao !

I would go on a treasure hunt and explore each year the bottom of the lake once the water drained

Since I was a kid I loved to collect smooth Peebles.

I think I would find some very interesting items before the snow covers everything in winter.

That's a cool black and white photo you took .. it's very beautiful where you live.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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What a beautiful winter Haiku poem you have created. I like the picture you chose it compliments the poem quite nicely.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Cecilia! It is pretty rare that I take my own photos for these contests and this was an even rarer case of the artwork itself inspiring the haiku. 🦍
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 17-Dec-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Noble Collins
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Finally - a Haiku I can relate to and appreciate. Far too many are just three lines thrown together masquerading as the real thing. This work is full, complete, captivating, a vision, visceral, compelling - a lot of words to describe my feelings toward a short number of words. No more pyrite. This is pure gold.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024