BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "North Country Magic"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
42 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, here we are again writing about cold winter! Another excellent job talking about something that is tough to live with, or at least tough for some of us who aren't living in Minnesota. L O L thanks for writing sis.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Well, here we are again writing about cold winter! Another excellent job talking about something that is tough to live with, or at least tough for some of us who aren't living in Minnesota. L O L thanks for writing sis.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Dan, you are so very sweet and I can't tell you how much your awesome comments mean to me about this Renga poem. It did feel a little magical to find that picture and I didn't know if everyone would feel the same as I did, but it worked. But you are too kind and I thank you again, my awesome
brother. Thanks for the six stars too!!!
Love and Hugs,
Debi
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It's 11:22 PM and Georgia and we know each other well enough that I'm not gonna spend much time on responding to these lovely replies but I have read every one and this is one more of my cut and paste jobs! L O L
You are most welcome.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
It looks like they know something to me. Like they are being reminded to store up on fuel for the coming sleigh
ride or something. Nice picture and powm. I added another one too. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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It looks like they know something to me. Like they are being reminded to store up on fuel for the coming sleigh
ride or something. Nice picture and powm. I added another one too. Karen
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Awe, Karen, you are so sweet and I love your sense of humor where these reindeer are concerned. Thank you so much for your fun review for my Renga poem. Love, Debi
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You are welcome. Karen
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debi,
You know, many people don't believe in the magic of Christmas... Santa and his flying reindeer and sleigh. But I do. I believe good old Saint Nick visits homes during the Christmas season, but instead of a bag of toys, he brings blessings to us that we don't readily see. I heard him one particular Christmas Eve up on our roof... the galloping reindeer, the sleigh runners sliding along, and the sleigh bells. As sure as I sit here in this computer chair, it was real. And those blessings have lasted me for the past 60 years!
In this wee couplet of 11 words, you have managed to capture Santa's reindeer before their grand duty of pulling that sleigh full of wonderful blessings. And we all need to be blessed, don't we? We crave them, along with the love of God, remembering the birth of our rescuer, Jesus Christ.
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Hi Debi,
You know, many people don't believe in the magic of Christmas... Santa and his flying reindeer and sleigh. But I do. I believe good old Saint Nick visits homes during the Christmas season, but instead of a bag of toys, he brings blessings to us that we don't readily see. I heard him one particular Christmas Eve up on our roof... the galloping reindeer, the sleigh runners sliding along, and the sleigh bells. As sure as I sit here in this computer chair, it was real. And those blessings have lasted me for the past 60 years!
In this wee couplet of 11 words, you have managed to capture Santa's reindeer before their grand duty of pulling that sleigh full of wonderful blessings. And we all need to be blessed, don't we? We crave them, along with the love of God, remembering the birth of our rescuer, Jesus Christ.
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Hey Kimbob, I should have known that you would have been the one to mostly feel and recognize what my words and graphic were trying to say. I had those exact thoughts in my head when I did this. I wanted to only hint at it tho with the little elegance of a real reindeer standing there and the words of magic in the air became to most of the Santa Claus theme.
And I too believe that the magical feeling that our childhood belief lingers on forever. Like the old letter said, "Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus." As the joy of the holidays truly is real, I only wish it would last all year. I guess that is up to us though. I don't believe that it takes away from our belief in Jesus, but just adds something to it. It sounds like what is in your heart so closely mimics what I is in mine.
So thanks for this awesome review and magical comments. You are the best, my very dear (deer) friend. You are pretty perceptive for a 39 year old. LOL.
Lotsa Love and Hugs! God bless! Debi
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I got so into talking about feelings I forgot to tell you how I felt about the six stars! They are Heavenly! Thanks so much for one sixth of your quota. Means the world to me.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is another fabulous poem for the Renga poems. There is magic in the air, I can feel it. That picture is stunning. So many of us have been caught up in this book, it's amazing how it has captured everyones imagination. It's fabulous, isn't it? Well done, Debi, on your magificent continuation. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This is another fabulous poem for the Renga poems. There is magic in the air, I can feel it. That picture is stunning. So many of us have been caught up in this book, it's amazing how it has captured everyones imagination. It's fabulous, isn't it? Well done, Debi, on your magificent continuation. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Sandra, thank so much for this awesome review and such kind words for my renga poem. It was fun to do and was also nice to be a part of the book.
I appreciate you so very much my sweet friend. With so much love back to you. Love, Debi
Comment from MissMerri
Yes... what a striking and thought-provoking Christmas poem. I loved this, and especially enjoyed how cleverly you managed to convey a sweet and provocative story in so few words. What a pleasure I find each time I open a post from you! Thanks Debi. MM
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Yes... what a striking and thought-provoking Christmas poem. I loved this, and especially enjoyed how cleverly you managed to convey a sweet and provocative story in so few words. What a pleasure I find each time I open a post from you! Thanks Debi. MM
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Adonna, you are so very sweet and I can't tell you how much your awesome comments mean to me about this Renga poem. It did feel a little magical to find that picture and I didn't know if everyone would feel the same as I did, but it worked. But you are too kind and I thank you again, my lovely friend.
Love and Hugs, Debi
Comment from Sanku
Thhere is magic in the ait in this season . Christmas is a season for magic .to spread love and good wishes.. Santa and his deer would be busy now.. loved the picture and your lines too.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thhere is magic in the ait in this season . Christmas is a season for magic .to spread love and good wishes.. Santa and his deer would be busy now.. loved the picture and your lines too.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Hello Santha, my deer friend. LOL. I am in a little bit of a silly mood today, so never mind me. Thanks for the lovely comments for my Renga poem. I do appreciate it so very much. Love, and hugs! Debi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We have reindeer not far from where I live Debi, and it is a joy to see them, especially at this time of year. Your words are endearing and magical, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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We have reindeer not far from where I live Debi, and it is a joy to see them, especially at this time of year. Your words are endearing and magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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You are such a gem, my deer friend, Dolly. LOL. I am in a little bit of a silly mood today, so never mind me. Thanks for the lovely comments for my Renga poem. I do appreciate it so very much. Love, and hugs! Debi
Comment from Aussie
Short and sweet. Santa has his pick of reindeer before they are culled for meat. Hardy breeders. It's an interesting micro poem. There's not much to say in that form. There must be a legend about the reindeer pulling his sleigh, all fiction except for the children and you are a big kid! KXX
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Short and sweet. Santa has his pick of reindeer before they are culled for meat. Hardy breeders. It's an interesting micro poem. There's not much to say in that form. There must be a legend about the reindeer pulling his sleigh, all fiction except for the children and you are a big kid! KXX
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Awe, Kace you are too sweet and I love that you stopped by. This is a little different for me but it was better for the eyes. Yeah, there must be a legend somewhere about reindeer. LOL. Thanks for your fun and awesome comments and your sweet six stars. You are such a gem, deer friend. (Like what I did there w the spelling?) Hahaha. Love, and hugs! Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice Renga poem about Reindeer and the North country where they live. I like the image you chose to illustrate the poem and the optimistic tone of the poem
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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nice Renga poem about Reindeer and the North country where they live. I like the image you chose to illustrate the poem and the optimistic tone of the poem
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Jake, thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from gansach
What a beautiful presentation and your words present a world of wonder~a snowy northern land where majestic creatures roam and wonderful things may happen. Great job, Debi!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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What a beautiful presentation and your words present a world of wonder~a snowy northern land where majestic creatures roam and wonderful things may happen. Great job, Debi!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Hi Gail, and thanks so much for the awesome review and comments for my North Country Magic. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend. Love, Debi