Haiku (winter rains create)
Mother nature at her best5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Winter Rains Create, has the proper formatting and creates a picture of life finding a way through the winter weather and providing an opportunity for growth. Neat.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Winter Rains Create, has the proper formatting and creates a picture of life finding a way through the winter weather and providing an opportunity for growth. Neat.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Gayla putnam
The picture selection goes well with your beautiful words. I love the line nature's rejuvenation. I admire haiku writers, it's a talent. I don't know why, but the last line seems off. Again, I'm not a poet, but it doesn't flow as well as the first two, which are great. gayla
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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The picture selection goes well with your beautiful words. I love the line nature's rejuvenation. I admire haiku writers, it's a talent. I don't know why, but the last line seems off. Again, I'm not a poet, but it doesn't flow as well as the first two, which are great. gayla
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from June Sargent
Such a profound thought captured in three short lines! Rejuvenation in the spring allows mothers to give birth. Beautiful imagery. This will keep me warm through the winter rains...
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Such a profound thought captured in three short lines! Rejuvenation in the spring allows mothers to give birth. Beautiful imagery. This will keep me warm through the winter rains...
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding comments, and the six stars
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery.
-Very good description of "winter rains"
and why they are important.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery.
-Very good description of "winter rains"
and why they are important.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Kahlani
Beautifully written poem relating rain to the rejuvenation power of mother nature. So simple yet so powerful. Thank you for sharing this romantic poem.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Beautifully written poem relating rain to the rejuvenation power of mother nature. So simple yet so powerful. Thank you for sharing this romantic poem.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
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You're welcome 😊