My Color Is Different,
Life in the outback, racial tensions.6 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
Well composed. The poet has chosen an effective rhyme in verse, presenting an apt response to the prompt. The message to this reader is so vividly conveyed, that we can all keep faith in ourselves, and keep going.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Well composed. The poet has chosen an effective rhyme in verse, presenting an apt response to the prompt. The message to this reader is so vividly conveyed, that we can all keep faith in ourselves, and keep going.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful review, was somewhat hard to write this as it is really not a kind commentary on some people's behavior towards anybody not in their sphere of influence.Thanks as
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Rick,
This is a wonderful story, if not sad. It told a story all the way to completion. It has a good rhyme scheme working as well.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Rick,
This is a wonderful story, if not sad. It told a story all the way to completion. It has a good rhyme scheme working as well.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks as always, this was difficult to write, asked myself , is this appropriate?
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Rick,
You're welcome. Your poem wasn't inappropriate. I thought it was just fine.
Cecilia
Comment from royowen
There are so many sad stories my friend, this is lost in a malaise of broken themes, it seems to match that stream of consciousness that mixes with a very sad world, lost in a stormy sea with only a small raft to hold to, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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There are so many sad stories my friend, this is lost in a malaise of broken themes, it seems to match that stream of consciousness that mixes with a very sad world, lost in a stormy sea with only a small raft to hold to, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Had to show how hate lives in some. They hate themselves also,
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Well done Rick
Comment from Barry Penfold
Yes, I can imagine it was a hard story to write. Good job and thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest. Yes, living together is the way to go. Show respect, Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Yes, I can imagine it was a hard story to write. Good job and thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest. Yes, living together is the way to go. Show respect, Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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We all deserve respect and need to give it daily to everyone.
Comment from DonandVicki
I have never understood racial issues, we are all the same in God's eyes. Those that are prejudice are insulting God which is a very stupid thing to do. Then those that are prejudice are ignorant.
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I have never understood racial issues, we are all the same in God's eyes. Those that are prejudice are insulting God which is a very stupid thing to do. Then those that are prejudice are ignorant.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from lancellot
Yes, getting attacked for any reason is never an easy thing to handle. In the end the reasons of the attackers don't matter much, the harm done is all the same. Good end rhymes.
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Yes, getting attacked for any reason is never an easy thing to handle. In the end the reasons of the attackers don't matter much, the harm done is all the same. Good end rhymes.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024