Is It Worth It?
I rather sit with my computer.3 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
I certainly can't think of anything worse, I love how you've use glazed eyes, I've seen that glaze lol! It's crazy...have to admit I'm an online shopper too with a nice cup of coffee in the comfort of my own home! This is a good humour poem and a great entry for the prompt, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
I certainly can't think of anything worse, I love how you've use glazed eyes, I've seen that glaze lol! It's crazy...have to admit I'm an online shopper too with a nice cup of coffee in the comfort of my own home! This is a good humour poem and a great entry for the prompt, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a wonderful poem about the madness of Black Friday. I ventured out one time for Black Friday and I've never felt the need to do it again. I'll pay a little extra for what I want. I don't like big wall to wall masses off people.
About 8 years ago when we lived in Reno, NV there was a road rage incident on black Friday where one driver got out and shot and killed the other person all over a parking space. People don't play nice on Black Friday.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
This is a wonderful poem about the madness of Black Friday. I ventured out one time for Black Friday and I've never felt the need to do it again. I'll pay a little extra for what I want. I don't like big wall to wall masses off people.
About 8 years ago when we lived in Reno, NV there was a road rage incident on black Friday where one driver got out and shot and killed the other person all over a parking space. People don't play nice on Black Friday.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Too many idiots have guns thanks to the irresponsibility of the NRA and greedy legislators. Just my opinion. Thanks for read and feedback.
Comment from RodG
I truly commend you for achieving all the requirements of this challenging format. You also PUT US THERE in the Mall on Black Friday, participating in the havoc and wild competition. I especially like line 2, describing the shoppers' eyes. Rod
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
I truly commend you for achieving all the requirements of this challenging format. You also PUT US THERE in the Mall on Black Friday, participating in the havoc and wild competition. I especially like line 2, describing the shoppers' eyes. Rod
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Though I have never engaged in this experience, my wife and children have recounted their memories of Black Friday. Thanks for the feedback.