Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Trap"In the dark, the screams never stop.
3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
The suspense is killing me, Marilyn. You have written it so well and are to be commended for continuing to hold the readers attention with the action of escaping or catching ...one doesn't know.
Smiles, Carol
Some gremlins again....
new sound???"faint
normal engine sound???"it
looked like a trap???"too narrow
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The suspense is killing me, Marilyn. You have written it so well and are to be commended for continuing to hold the readers attention with the action of escaping or catching ...one doesn't know.
Smiles, Carol
Some gremlins again....
new sound???"faint
normal engine sound???"it
looked like a trap???"too narrow
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
I am Sarah now, trapped by this story, the rain is pounding now. Bring me back. Seriously this takes you into the same events, the same dreaded thoughts become one with you. Thanks now I can't sleep.
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I am Sarah now, trapped by this story, the rain is pounding now. Bring me back. Seriously this takes you into the same events, the same dreaded thoughts become one with you. Thanks now I can't sleep.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Wow, I liked this story. Plenty of action and well described. The tension was conveyed very well and held my attention all the way. Thanks for sharing. I will be keen to see the next chapter.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Wow, I liked this story. Plenty of action and well described. The tension was conveyed very well and held my attention all the way. Thanks for sharing. I will be keen to see the next chapter.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024